Reviews for The Avenger's Shadow
braindamage730 chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
i liked this 1
dreamlifter chapter 1 . 7/13/2006
Way awesome. Shikamaru is indeed, the Man
Serene. Panda chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
A tad bit OOC , a tad bit ...but I actually loved the fight scene! Yeah...okay!

-Kurayami-sama
Clark Cradic chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Very Nice! You should do more of these.
Moshulel chapter 1 . 9/6/2005
Nice fic , at least finish it , Shikamaru is highly protective of his friends after all
Bob chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
WO! PROGRESS! AWESOME FIGHT SCENE!

But really, it was really awesome.
200 IQ chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
shikatema. thanks. good fight scene.
vedmid chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
very nice, I personally would like to see more of this

good job with the fight, I imagine its suprisingly hard to write out shikamaru's fighting methods
treepresident chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
progress!
Iceheart chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Wow. This was really good. I loved every bit of the fight.
TRIJ chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
You shouuld continue! Loved the last line!
Hououza chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Excellent fight, would like to see how you would continue this.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
hells-fox chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
you have to at least finish the fight you can't leave the story there.
Phishy Chan chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Hmm...It wasn't bad as far as technicalities go. I'mm impressed with the setup you made for the fights, and utilizing Sasuke and Shikamaru's moves like that. It's something I could never do, since I don't look too much into the characters' signature moves at all.

The only thing that bugged me about the entire fic was Shikamaru's motive. It seemed OOC, especially when he randomly feels angry over Ino and Temari. For one, he doesn't care enough about either character to go into a fight to the death with Sasuke. Instead, it would've been a better idea to go with Chouji, since it's much easier to see Shikamaru so upset over him. So for that reason, I couldn't enjoy this fic as much as I could have.
g chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Nice, turn this into a Ino/temari/Shika threesome!