Reviews for Return to Red Rock
snugglebug chapter 2 . 4/22/2005
I loved it! Very sweet, I can see them getting all situated to take the picture together, and I have no doubt it'll hold special meaning for them later on. :)
martini1988 chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
wher is part 2 ;)
airbear23 chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Interesting. Can't wait to see where this goes. Please update soon.
eridani chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
This is a good introductory chapter. You've put all the important issues on the table and set up your story line well. I'm looking forward to reading the rest. Update soon.
TomcatGM chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Lol. Oh, man. I'm done reading, and the "Bugme Reincarnate" line is still cracking me up. :) I love the first person approach, and I think you've handled it well. I hope you stick with Harm's POV and don't switch back and forth. Very good set up to the story, and I'm looking forward to more.


...Bugme Reincarnate...oh, man...
marineJAG chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Glad you decided to post this! I can't wait until you post your next chapter! Keep it coming!
Radiorox chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Hehehe, I like the start already! More please! :)
starryeyes10 chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
great story.
snugglebug chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Very cool! Such a great idea for a story. The potential is just endless, and I can't wait until you get the next part posted!
dansingwolf chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
yay, this is great, harm and mac gettin' some alone-time!
zeilfanaat chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
Hey, this is a good start!

I'd love to read more!

Please update soon!
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