|Reviews for Challenging the Darkness|
| 3Mkinz chapter 32 . 12/25/2013
Truely amazing. I love your stories. They invoke so much emotion, imagination, and laughter. I hope you continue as you are an amazing writer.
| Mike.Delphi chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
Only 1 critique for this chapter. And it's relatively minor. Albus' full name is Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore. You switched Wulfric and Brian and left out Percival. Great story though or I wouldn't be on my 3rd read of the series.
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/2/2013
Albus Wulfric Percival Brian Dumbledore
-i think, from the top of my head
| Svenion chapter 17 . 4/17/2013
so Harry has been taking it easy on rapists, arsonists, and psychopathic killers? he deserves to be killed, then.
| lordanubis6238 chapter 32 . 3/27/2013
amazing story! on to the epilogue!
| Svenion chapter 32 . 1/29/2013
Can't believe you killed Neville
| Chris chapter 32 . 1/27/2013
This story is awesome although there is one problem which is obvious I think you cant keep track of all the characters like hermione barely has any lines in this story and alex's role has been reduced
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 16 . 7/2/2012
Moony and Padfoot are going to MURDER him!
Harry is SO dead!
| deanec64 chapter 32 . 5/15/2012
wonderful story and ending. thanks for writing :-)
| Rheastar chapter 32 . 3/21/2012
Great conclusion! I loved it. Thanks for writing such a great series!
| xbamsod chapter 32 . 12/26/2011
Bloody Brilliant! The fight scene was amazing and I really like the breaks the Order had between the war. Its nice to know that it is over and that everything is fine now. At least nobody very important died in the battle. :)
| blueberrypie94 chapter 32 . 11/30/2011
Wow this series was amazing! I really enjoyed it!
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 22 . 7/25/2011
That is so sweet! I reminds me of the part where Camryn and Alex defeated the Darkness in "Twitches"(a Disney Channel movie that only comes on TV during the month of October). Where did you get the idea for the wards and the words for each one?
| incognito chapter 6 . 6/20/2011
yes the positionwas cursed by tommy when he came to apply and hide a horcrux!
| Ally chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
Hey, I'm reviewing again! (I'm the same Ally that reviewed on the last chapter of Power the Dark Lord Knows Not)
I think you’ve got the time for the Founders’ lives wrong. They founded Hogwarts about a thousand years ago, but you say here that Grindelwald Black was born almost two thousand years ago, a little time after the Founders died. You also said that (in the first instalment of this trilogy) that Salazar Slytherin had been alive on the time when they invented the light bulb (or maybe I misunderstood that?). Now I can agree that the Founders might have lived very long lives, but they can’t both have Founded Hogwarts a thousand years ago, lived to see the first light bulb, and died two thousand years ago.
Also, the fact that somebody has the same given name doesn’t mean they’re related, nor if someone has the same given name as somebody else’s surname. That Grindelwald Black should be the ancestor of the Grindelwald that Dumbledore defeated is slightly out there.
Even though you might have a wordcheck program now, there are some mistakes here. For example, you've written 'the one-eyed with statue' not the 'one-eyed witch statue', and these are things a wordcheck program wouldn't notice.
I might review some more on this story, but if you want to answer anything of what I've written directly, send me an email to "anonymous (underline) snake
(you've got to remove the spaces and replace the words in the paranthesises with the correct signs).
-best wishes, Ally