Reviews for Past Peripheral Vision
mademoiselle anna chapter 16 . 6/1/2008
i feel awfully disappointed... at myself mostly. I honestly want to be able to read this story, but the format makes me want to skip scenes. The format is so condensed and it makes it very difficult for me to follow. Don't get me wrong, the story is good, the prose is well written- the story is good, but not good enough for me put up with the presentation style.
ribbons-paws chapter 23 . 5/25/2008
Aw... that was cute!
mintxrain chapter 23 . 4/12/2008
:OO fantastical. XD
mintxrain chapter 15 . 4/7/2008
Itachi is a bitch in this. o-o Chap 15..
mintxrain chapter 12 . 4/6/2008
-o- possesive much sasuke?
mintxrain chapter 10 . 4/6/2008
Aww
mintxrain chapter 9 . 4/6/2008
Aww.
mintxrain chapter 7 . 4/6/2008
XD
mintxrain chapter 6 . 4/6/2008
Erm. my chap 6 review. x-x;
mintxrain chapter 5 . 4/6/2008
:D
mintxrain chapter 4 . 4/6/2008
:D YARR.
mintxrain chapter 3 . 4/4/2008
:D whoa..
mintxrain chapter 2 . 4/4/2008
YES.
mintxrain chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
I've decided to bump up your reviews. I just started this fic and Ill attempt to review most chapters. :DD
RofS chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
I believe that I have reviewed this story before... And I think it was a positive review. However, upon rereading this first chapter, I would like to point out that Tsunade's little monologue in the first section was a bit melodramatic, don't you think?
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