Excellent story! I felt like I was reading a Tom Clancy novel. Your characters were great. I loved Michael and Jenny. I absolutely Loved this story.

Have just finished reading the Guardian angels.
Excellent story!
Very well written!

I have read these superb stories almost once every year and have enjoyed them greatly.
I wondered if you had ever wrote the 4 installment of this series. There are only a very few writers who can do a crossover such as yours and make them this believably action packed
and emotional and just fabulous. If it is written and out there just tell me where to go to read it. great job.

Hey I just read your 3 stargate stories again. and I love how well you wrote each cross over. So good. When is the fourth one coming out? It has been a long while in process. PLEASE

Well I just finished reading the 3rd of your SGC/crossover stories and now am taking time to review them all

SO please enable your e-mail as I would have like to send you a thank you note just to say THANK YOU for your hard work and the enjoyment that your stories have give me and to also ask are you published as a story tell because if you are I would find space on my book shelf for your stories

As to review this story it has some very nice touch to it and some outstanding moments to it which make this story work so well it both holds and keep the reader interest in it, as part of a larger story it work very well and make me the read want to read more of your take on the larger story you touch on in your work

also it add to the over all stories it is base on which is hard to be when writing fanfiction but when it is done and done well this is the mark of a good fanfiction writer

which you are so well done to you and one more thank you for all your hard work and sharing it with us all

Carick

have u ever written the fourth story.

Even though the last story in the SG13/Guardian Angel Series was written over five years ago, I hold out some hope that you will write the fourth story you mentioned in the third chapter. I have greatly enjoyed the characters you have created, and would love to read more. Hopefully you'll go back to your SG fan fiction someday. Until then, I'm putting you into an author alert so I can continue to enjoy your work. - JS

I really liked your Suicide Squad series. Are you still looking into doing a 4th? If so I can't wait.

The references to God and real angels was obviously a huge flaw in the story, but if I can tolerate that while reading Chesterton mysteries, I can tolerate your interweaving your asinine beliefs into your fic. It is, after all, your fic, and worth reading.

The high point was the revelation that Michael had hidden away so many of the Angels - very plausible, nice and mystery-like. Too many to be realistic, but that's ok. You are permitted your... hyperbole.

And all the references to saving lives of Americans, instead of saving lives of innocents... ew. How disgustingly nationalistic.

... many if not most were now either cops or lawyers...

Not military?

Pity Daniel's and Sam's role was reduced mostly to afterthoughts, Teal'c even more so.

For crying out loud, learn to put periods at the end of sentences.

I was rather looking forward to Control getting slugged by Jenny or something...

Nice idea with the fiction writing by Michael.

Best lines:

“Of course.” Veronica smiled, wondering what was going on. So far the Angel family had consisted of black, white, oriental and even Hispanic. This was one weird family.

“Yes” Stanley agreed “In the types of books Michael likes, it’s always black and white, while Michael had to exist in a world where everything was gray and never simple. I can see why the simplicity of that world would appeal to him.”

The reunions at the end were tear jerkers. (Well, they were enough to jerk my tears.)

Nice chapter, though too long to really comment on.

The allusions to Andrew, Monica, and Tess being somehow a higher entity - close to the Christian God - is worrying. All religions with gods are instruments of abuse, you know.

I wish we had some SG-1 off-world missions. Missing dem Jaffa.

The little we've seen of Gabe and Josie wasn't enough either. Lots of Daisy, true, but...

Ah, now Sydney and Nigel. There's an interesting couple. Looking forward to reading more about them in the next chapter.

You are writing Michael very well.

Great start. I'm not sure he's as good a character as Gabriel Fuentes, but Michael Hammond is interesting.

Great story.

Hi,

Loved the story, but the second part is not available, i tried many times always with the same result.

so i read the first part and this one, but i know i missed out on some pretty important stuff. could you look into that please.. dying to read what i missed.

thanks

I've read and thoroughly enjoyed all three stories in this series. You are an amazing writer. Keep them coming!

I love this series, and have saved all the stories to hard drive for conversion into a single, unified ebook for ease of rereading on my PDA, and I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing further stories in the set.

By the way, are you aware that you're missing a chapter in "SG-13 Suicide Squad"? You've got a major continuity gap between posted chapters ten and eleven, and you've got a ton of things that you've setup that have to be paid off in that missing chapter. You've got the wedding between Daisy and Gabe, Josie's concert, Daniel and Teal'c getting their medals, etc. and the chapter isn't there for the payoff to happen. Chapter Ten leaves off with Master Bra'tac's arrival and Chapter Eleven picks up with Gabe and Daisy in desert camo getting ready to leave for Abydos, so you've got a major time gap with at least a half dozen or more story threads that you've setup to pay off in that gap, and nothing is there. Any chance of your posting the missing chapter? Pretty please? I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm