|Reviews for Wire|
| Loyal Integra Fanboy chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
great fic. So funny. Cheese and pickle! _
| Baron Hausenpheffer chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Very good job! Yeah, it never ceases to amaze me how different Walter's personas as "family butler" and "angel of death" are. If it weren't for the fact that he switches from one to another so smoothly, one would think that he's bipolar...
| Sailor Water Dragon chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
WHO! GO WALTER! _ great job! i love this story! lol instant sandwich cutters! buhehehe lol GREAT JOB!
| DreadNot chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
And Walter is, indeed, super cool.
I like your descriptions very much, nicely done. His musings on alternate uses were amusing. A few nitpicks on inconsistent capitalization and a few instances of less than perfect grammar, but overall a decent fic with a writer who shows promise.
A good beta reader will help with most of the things I'd nitpick.