|Reviews for Unoriginality 1: An Original Trainer Story|
| desdendelle chapter 20 . 1/4
The chapters I've read so far were good, but this one caused me to laugh so hard my ribs hurt. 1 for a well-written parody, and though I've not browsed 's Pokemon category... at all, I think? I assume this is pretty accurate. Chapeau.
| ASiriusWriter01 chapter 28 . 8/16/2013
I know that I am monstrously late in saying this, but this was a really helpful chapter. In fact, this whole story is insanely helpful to me. I finally have a resource to keep my characters and plot in line. Thank you so much for writing this. I hope that you eventually get around to updating this again.
| Aardvark123 chapter 13 . 8/2/2013
This chapter gets rather philosophical towards the end, and is all the better for it.
| 98penguin chapter 13 . 7/23/2013
This is quite a thoughtful chapter. It's almost philosophical by the end, and isn't really about pokemon anymore. Very good! I have also liked that ones that are flat out parodies too. Although if you're talking about respecting canon, (with the ages and which towns have what buildings, etc) then Team Rocket shouldn't use guns! Or at least not use them to 1x1 situations, because if they did Ash would've died decades ago. That parody should have been something pointing out that an older man would have stronger pokemon, because he been training 20X longer than the kid. :)
| sandraman chapter 6 . 6/8/2013
I have always been annoyed by the fact that Ash had only a school bag and Misty only a small child's sailor bag.
(Not to mentioning the obvious lack of warm clothes.)
Only person who really had what it takes, was Brock and somehow He managed to pack some chairs and a camping table along?
| Some Random Dude chapter 22 . 2/17/2013
Not really a complaint, just Black and White and Black and White 2.
That is all.
| Math chapter 28 . 1/8/2013
Funny thing about averages.
If 99 people have perfectly nice emotions, and one, Jeremy, does not, the average emotion niceness would be 99%, and 99 people would be above average.
| popsky chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I really love this, the insight and the parody, the way you tell them, everything. Thanks, I hope you update it! :)
| Bonbon82 chapter 14 . 11/30/2012
This is really good (the whole parody thing) and I love how you pointed out so many cliche things that happen in most fanfictions. I don't really find much OT stories since half of them never finish past 5 chapters. Also, funny thing is, one of my teachers is named Mr. Pyne (yes, the students make Pine tree references XD)
| BEN chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
THATS AMAZING YOU KNOW SHE GOT TO FIND A FIRE STONE SO VULPIX IS A NINETALL
| hannyfish chapter 28 . 6/17/2012
This is... very good. It's so detailed and informative!
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/5/2012
I named my Umbreon in Heartgold Mephiles after the villin in Sonic /06. XD Hey, I like the name! Anyway, this is a very intresting story so far and it gives realy good advice on what to not do. :)
| Fan Rider Ryu chapter 18 . 4/17/2012
...Did you just take a jab at my boy Butterfree? Of course you realize, this means WAR!
| synonymsforempathy chapter 7 . 4/10/2012
Awww, poor Catherine! But you had such an un-suish, original, imaginative character! Perhaps the readers weren't satisfied with the level of awesomeness...oh! I know! You just need to make your character be much more perfect!
| synonymsforempathy chapter 6 . 4/10/2012
Heh- have you ever heard of the UGB camping supplies? Or the 24-hour packs? I'd say that's what the girl needed.
Whoa. I am not the only one to notice how the feet has specific points of pain. You are my role model.