|Reviews for One Step Closer|
| laneygirl12 chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
that was so good! it was sad though. i cried. Great story!
| temptresslove chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
i honestly liked the story ...
why did he have to kill her ?
| DracoMalfoy'sChick chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
It was good but sad at the end. I liked it though
| MistariaPotter chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
okay, well IM AM SO CLOSE TO CRYING! OMEGOD!
| s.grand chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
My God, you have a hang for this! That was actually really good...I cant believe he was actually determined to kill her. Ahh, well, atleast she got what she wanted.
Great job, as usual! :)
| folk chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
GAH! There is no *way* that I haven't reviewed this! Do you know how much I freaking love this fic? I don't even think Draco or Hermione are necessarily acting OOC...they're just very screwed-up from what happened in your story here.
You realize, don't you, that from the kiss on is absolutely perfect? :) (and I don't really say that that often)
My mom's telling me to get off the computer so I can get up at 4 am and get on the road to the airport (woot) so I'll go...but another review for you, and I'm putting this in my Fanfiction Gold (which, as you know, is only *the* best stories...not joking. I think October Hollow is in there...and if it's not, it will be soon) C2.
K...ttys, adios! :D
| smooth.stutter chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
So sad. But an excellent piece of writing. I saw you're list of VERY long complaints, and I have to say, I completely and utterly agree with you. Ta for now...
| YourBeautifulDisaster chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
this is really good. i like the way it was written. but draco is OOC. oh well. doesnt matter if its a good story.
| purplecrazy2291 chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
omg he killed her
| lilydarling chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
it's not detailed enough.
it could be very good if you would redo it like Forever and Always.
the words are too rushed. you should describe the emotion and tension lingering in the air.
| imsimplyme chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
I love this one shot!
| The Apple After Poison chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
omg... that was seriously some good writing there..
XoXo loved it
| Puzon1234 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
WHY? I'm freakin' crying right now! I love it but I hate it too! OMG! Man you're such a great author but please don't kil them! WHA! Great story though!
| Angelo Del Ghiaccio chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
THIS IS SO SAD BUT GOOD! I LOVE THIS STORY!
| aznphreak1218 chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
Why did you do that ending?