|Reviews for Torn|
| dop chapter 13 . 4/12/2014
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
| DBZ Critic chapter 13 . 1/29/2014
Your story isn't done yet, and it is 2014. However, it is a riveting tale.
| meerlorre chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
I realise you haven't updated this story in years, but what the hell.
Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. I think you did a great job of delving into a dark Vegeta's mind while still adding enough 'good guy-thoughts' to make him feel like the character we all know and love. Your story has a very realistic feel about it.
But two points that were bothering me nonentheless.
- Where are Bulma's parents in all of this? You did mention they live in a different building, but with the wreckage of the CC compound going on it seems unlikely that they didn't notice anything.
- The passive attitude of the rest of the Z-fighters seems strange. Where are Gohan, Picccolo, Tien, etc in this? Are they not sensing anything? And why hasn't Goku enlisted their help to stop Vegeta?
Anyway, just my opinion in case you still get e-mails and read this. I really like your story and wish you'd finished it, since at this point it feels like there's no ending. Hope you're well!
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/9/2013
why did you stop it. this is so great. please continue.
| leavingDress92 chapter 13 . 1/2/2013
please finish this! so good!
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/5/2012
*gulp* What is Vegeta planning on doing...
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/5/2012
Omg, how could Vegeta do that? He's so... ugh
| Guest chapter 10 . 9/5/2012
The way you write Vegeta's POV is awesome to read!
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/5/2012
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/5/2012
I feel so bad for them. :(
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/5/2012
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/5/2012
Oh no! Not Trunks, Vegeta! :c
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
God, Vegeta is so creepy! T_T
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2012
I'm going to read the next chapter now!