Reviews for Lotus Cards
angelwithbadluck chapter 8 . 1/7/2014
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY AWWW IT REALLY GOOD PLEASE UPDATE IT
hydro-serpent58 chapter 8 . 10/6/2013
So Touya is finally regaining his magic? That's awesome! :D I love how soon he'll be able to sense Sakura again and now he can see Nadeshiko again. :) I wonder, will Touya one day use Summon or Weapon? If he does, I feel like he will surpass Syaoran. The love of a brother can not be match by the love of a lover. And it makes sense in a way, Meiling and Touya, the two people that were rarely able to use offensive magic.

I also wonder, if a Guardian Beast will arrive? Or are Ying and Yang the beasts in disguise? Hmmm. Then again, Xing Xing and Hei seem to be filling in that role. It seems like Meiling is bound to be the Lotus Cardcaptor. But I wonder, if she's a Pheonix, Syaoran's a Dragon, and Sakura's a Star, what would Touya be? Would be be an animal or a constellation? Planet maybe? Or a fox to represent kitsune fire, sine pheonix is sacred fire and dragon is hell fire. And fox's are silent and sly guardians, intelligent and observant. Just like Touya is throughout the series. The wolf is closely associated with Syaoran so I was happy you chose Dragon instead, it makes more sense with his Chinese descent. :)

Will Air and Nature go against Windy and Earth? Hmmm. Since the cards are in Japan and China, what are the chances they're all over the world? O_O If it ends up in England...you know it's going to be a wild chase.
Or maybe, unlike Yue who judged Sakura to become CardCaptor, Hol Fa herself will judge as her spirit reamins amongst the living? Also, all Hol Fa said her requirements were, was to be a descendant. Could it be, because her requirement wasn't magic, but rather blood that enbled Meiling to use the cards? That's an ingenius loophole if it is.

And the helicopter. I wonder what news reporters and the police are thinking, who was the person and why is the skyscrapper suddenly the hanging gardens of Babylon? xD I like the way you used Nature, rather than freeze it and turn it to ice since an icebox wasn't available to her. Anyways, I've notcied you haven't updated since 2006, but I hope you will soon!
ComicXArena chapter 7 . 10/10/2010
Wow Hei is good! Cake~!
bostafu chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
Lovely story! I'm amazed as how well thought out you have created Meilin's weapon, her chant and the cards. Actually everything in this story is so well planned out! I also like how you created Meilin's character as someone who struggles as inside she has evil/selfish thoughts and feelings but try to push them away. I can really connect with that.

I just want to point out that "onee-chan" should be instead onii-chan.
nequam-tenshi chapter 8 . 11/5/2009
Is Eriol remembering his former sister?

Will Meiling find strenght from Xing Xing to move on?

When will you update? I know it's been nearly 3 years since you have updated but will you? I like your story very much and it's has a better plot than many who try to write Meiling as a cardcaptor! :)
nequam-tenshi chapter 7 . 11/5/2009
haha! Could she have made cake though?
Forlorn Maiden chapter 8 . 4/30/2007
I hope you plan on finishing this because it's good. _ Not enough Meiling fics out there.
jae maknae chapter 8 . 4/6/2007
Please update soon!
holylight88 chapter 8 . 2/23/2007
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Chibi-mint chapter 8 . 2/4/2007
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Serena chapter 1 . 1/6/2007
This is a little bit like Mei Lin Pai from Alice 19th, who is a "lotus master"... I thought that was a cute coincidence!
Ashley chapter 8 . 12/21/2006
Great job! And thank you for updating. Please update faster because this is my favorite fic.

Good luck!
SnowCharms chapter 8 . 12/12/2006
Wow! This is truly amazing! Hurry up n update! I can't wait 2 read ur nx chapter!
Jovianokami chapter 8 . 12/10/2006
Oh, man that was great! But what happen to Meilin needing to capture the death card? And WHAT THE HECK TOOK YOU SO LONG TO UPDATE? Ano, what the next card that show up? And what about Eriol? PLAESE UPDAT SOON! REALLY SOON!
cat chapter 7 . 3/21/2006
just saw this. It is nice and seems promising. Hope you update soon and pair mei ling up with Touya. Update soon and fabulous work. :P
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