Reviews for Lotus Cards
Maggy chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
Keep updating, oh and excellant job on the first chapter
Yukimi the Ice Goddess chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
The first half of the story blew me away. Amazing diolouge, great descriptions, even an accurate portrayel of Clow Reed. I'm amazed it hasn't gotten more reviews.

Then, for some reason when you got into Meilin's timeline, the quality dropped a bit. What happened? Not much, just some awkward sentance phrasing here and there.

Meilin is my favorite CCS character, by far. Keep writing! Read some of my stuff if you like!
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