Reviews for Triumvirate
MWkillkenny84 chapter 5 . 6/20/2012
Good story and good idea (damn'it, I wish there was MORE Naru/Keitaro/Motoko stories around!).

I've loved all the innuendos between the members of the Triumvirate, and the little three-way family feud.

Vote: 10
Samhan chapter 5 . 1/16/2011
SecondSeraphim chapter 5 . 12/20/2009
Why don't any of the good stories ever get continued...
George Mathew chapter 5 . 7/6/2008
Chaos Wrath chapter 5 . 5/8/2008
Now this looks promising, a love-triangle without the risk of somebody cheating _

Joke aside, great story-idea, very wellwritten and keeps the readers interest high.

Can't wait for the next piece, keep up the good work ;)
1v2 chapter 5 . 4/25/2008
man what a good fic not only does keitaro end up with motoko but also naru talk about great fic can't wait for the next chapter.
MiyazawaFan chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Interesting concept. I'm on of the rare people who likes both Motoko and Naru, so I never really liked the other stories of this stripe. One, in particular, I remember that Naru got her hand cut off... with no consequences to Motoko at all. This, I think, will be a much more lighthearted read.
FF-loverHP1 chapter 5 . 7/29/2006
that was well... weird...
AnimaRulz0392 chapter 5 . 7/10/2006
I have nothing to flame about except YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON. It's been three months and i am getting impatiant. But with that out of the way i have to say you are a talented writer and you have me utterly hooked on this story. I have already re-read it like 4 times and have finally decided to review to see if you were still alive or not and give a little reminder that people are hungry and ready to devour more chapters.
anime-otaku420 chapter 5 . 6/1/2006
HAHAHA... very interesting twist with a triple marriage. really funny. UPDATE SOON! cant wait
wayne chapter 2 . 5/15/2006
woah great story
Joe Habana chapter 5 . 5/8/2006
O_o men... as the biggest fan of lave Hina and the biggest fan of the Keitaro and Motoko-ojouSama o_o... (also of the Motoko X Shinobu and the Keitaro and Mizuho) i must say...

perfect men TToTT... this is one of the most originial fics that i ever read in my Life TToTT...

which girl will be the first in consuming the marriage O_o...Naru or Motoko... How will Keitaro React at this? The autor Will Change it to a Rated M? (i hope he doesnt u_u... i dont like so much the lemon u_u...
Antoniusan chapter 5 . 4/21/2006
I was a bit suspicious toward this since I hate Naru. But this have surprisingly been very good to this point. Piece of advice: longer and more chapters please.
Dannyboy chapter 5 . 4/17/2006
Whoa, this is really an ... how to put it ... interesting situation, but completely in the spirit of Love Hina. Mr. Akamatsu himself could have thought something this weird up, but I doubt he could have put it down on paper, or in this case, computer, as good as you have. Too bad with your illnesses, hope you'll be all right soon. Please update soon and (guesses at what to come, anyone?) keep up the good work!
TwilightZekk chapter 5 . 4/9/2006
Nice work.
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