Reviews for Yuki x Kyou
DarkFary chapter 9 . 11/2/2016
Dear Author...
Sorry I haven't written in a wile, i got cot up in the story. And think you should go with chapter 9.
P.S. I personally think you should continue there story in america.
-Sencrally
DarkFairy
DarkFary chapter 2 . 11/2/2016
Dear Author...
Ok, that was awesome. Much, much beter. I love how you spred the drama out.
-Senceraly
DarkFairy
DarkFary chapter 1 . 11/2/2016
Dear Author...
I love it. An absolutely amasing format, but you need to give them more resistance torwd each other. Draw the reader in, make it juicy, make the reader want more. The obstical neer the end was defiantly intreaging. Try to stretch it out a litte more, give the drama more time to settle in. The ending is good, but try see from the readers point of view. Do you see it? If you end it with a dramatic cliff hanger,the reader is more likely to go to the next chapter. Thank you for listening to my blabbing.
-sincerely
Dark Fairy
Alyssa chapter 3 . 11/29/2015
Well this is the first story that has ever gotten me to nosebleed like this. Now I must go get a tissue. ;-)
Alyssa chapter 2 . 11/29/2015
That was so funny. I lovehow they were creeping on them.
Alyssa chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
That was cute and I can't wait to enjoy the rest f this!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Hell yeah!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/14/2014
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I SHOULD HAVE JUST BEEN SATISFIED KNOWING WHAT THE GOOD ENDING WAS!
fan benvin and shoey chapter 10 . 9/7/2014
the happy one plz the sad one sucks ofcorse unless akito has sex with yuki but otherwise happy ending plz
I have an idea chapter 10 . 6/18/2014
Mabey you could turn the sad ending into a happy one based off the happy one? Like in kyou is uncontious for hours and there trapped in the room together for hours and the two people in the last chapter come and save them and take them home then to the air port and leave and wright about there new life eft ect.. But I really like the happy one more because I swear to god if kyou dies I will stab my iPad and cry for days and never read another fan fic again
Guest chapter 10 . 4/14/2014
JUST LET ME SAY I'VE READ ALL OF YOUR FANFICTION AND EACH ONE IS BETTER THAN THE LAST YOU ARE AMAZING I LOVE YOU'RE WRITING SO MUCH PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE
savannah loves Y chapter 10 . 3/6/2014
THIS ENDING PPPLLLLLEEEAAASEEE AND MAKE MORE 7TS SUPER AMAMZING
Ghost-fan879 chapter 10 . 1/21/2014
stick with the sad one then u can make somthing interesting happen but not the second one thats just like ok we r done with this good bye STICK WITH #10
Tohru1honda chapter 9 . 10/29/2013
Cute story I love the happy ending you wrote
Tohru1honda chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
It's a cute story
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