|Reviews for The Wizard of Darkness|
| Chiame-Yoru chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Great idea. I can see why Riku would make a good Tin Man.
| thehoundsfox chapter 4 . 6/9/2005
yay! Quistis is in it ! i just want wiku now wah! again with returns like exsample a.
"I love you Riku!"
black sheep runs twards riku riku pushes her off
"BAck stalker Back I have Maze and i know how to use it"
riku sprays it in his eye by accident and runs around while Balsck Sheep chases after Riku arms out saying
"I love you!"
See hope i helped love your story
| thehoundsfox chapter 3 . 6/9/2005
chappie was good... I SAID RIKU NOT RIKKU! haha just kidding umm yeah i figured it out maybee if you start like a new paragraph after someone says somthing it might no be too over whelming to read cause the stuff is good its just hard to follow. i dont know if you understand what im saying but w/e.
p.s. um hope i didnt bash too hard this is not a flame! i love you and your story you are awesome!
| thehoundsfox chapter 2 . 6/9/2005
jade is a cool character mwhahahaha umm Riku please! im starting to die with out him
| thehoundsfox chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
go you so far so good! um i have one quicky question...is riku gonna be in this fic? he is like the best character in the world and it would be awesomie for you to have em in there
| HakushoRurouni chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Okay, first off this is already looking to be a great fic. However, you need to space your paragraphs.
If you keep them jumbled up like they are nobody's gonna want to read it, seeing as it's already hardly any space between sentences.
But this is an overall great story!