|Reviews for My Brother|
| crypto496 chapter 11 . 4/25/2009
hey i agree with you that this could be a little hard to read but i also find it very romantic. it's very touching how they came togther and are still loving each other despite what could go wrong. please don't take the story off the net. its one of the few taikari's that flow smoothly and clearly. true their are some good ones (that don't contain sexual relations) that are really good. so keep up the good work i'm rooting for you guy or girl whichever
| P.E.R.S.O.N.A EXPERT chapter 5 . 3/26/2009
really good story so far.
| Kaikari chapter 27 . 1/23/2009
I've read some pretty awsome Taikari, but this one is without a dought the best ever!
please update, It was just getting so exiting
| badkidoh chapter 28 . 1/2/2009
well, just read all 28 and great but to bad there isn't more stuff like in chapter 8.
i wonder what will happen in the storyline will go next,
i'm not really sure how the dad & mom will take it because the show takes place in japan and in japan incest is generally considered immoral but incest is not illegal in japan, but they still can't get married in japan.
well form what i read in chapter 28 the dad is infuriated but i can't be sure of the reason yet , it could be because taichi & hikari have been keeping it secret form him and his wife or that he thinks that taichi & hikari are having sex or that taichi forced hikari because of the small age difference or something or it could be that he is just not open minded and thinks it's immoral, have no idea what the mom going think about it.
not sure why but i'm guessing your going to go with immoral for the reason.
not really sure if this story is dead or not but you last update in 2006 and it's 2009 now, so you forgot about this story or chapter 29 is super long after 3 years in the making chapter.
| x81ublu8x chapter 28 . 12/23/2008
Zomg, 2 years man, this is like the litany of blood ( Harry Potter ) just don't die or anything.
| x81ublu8x chapter 12 . 12/23/2008
This is a great story and one that has made my arrival into Digi-mon fandom more enjoyable.
| rommy chapter 28 . 12/19/2008
| InTheYearOfTheCat chapter 28 . 12/8/2008
IT'S ONE CHAPTER MAN. ONE CHAPTER.
YOU CAME THIS FAR. CAN'T YOU GET OFF YOUR ASS AND WRITE ONE MORE CHAPTER? WHAT HAPPENS?
| Lydia chapter 28 . 9/24/2008
You can't stop there! This fic is so good, one of the best I've seen of the pairing! Plz u have to write more
| wilkiswilk chapter 28 . 9/10/2008
it's been about 2 years since you last updated...just give us the ending, will ya?
| Sightbent chapter 28 . 4/12/2008
This story is incredible well written. Your greatest talent is your ability to write descriptions, many times I felt like I was actually watching something instead of just reading. I just hope you haven't given up this fic because it would be a tragedy to see such a story die so close to the end. Please don't give it up becasue I'll be looking forward to reading it.
| Sightbent chapter 19 . 4/11/2008
| Sightbent chapter 9 . 4/11/2008
I'd never really thought of Taichi and Kari as a couple but you've done a really good job of it with this story. I'm completely sold on the pairing and it's only chapter 9. This story is just amazing and I can't wait to see how their relationship continues to develop.
| Sightbent chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
I heard about this story from a profile from another author who's also writing a Taichi X Hikari fic, they said it was a great story. So I'm looking forward to reading more, since this story inspired the one I'm reading now.
| maiHeart chapter 28 . 3/24/2008
You have made a wonderful story!I really love it!
Hope you you'll finish the story,im dieing to see
whats gonna happen on the last highly unlikely you'll updated snce the last time you updated was in 2006,but
there's always hope right?