Reviews for Butterfly in Reverse |
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![]() ![]() That's a pretty dark reason for Kakashi to give them the puppies to train as nin-dogs, I just hope it doesn't come to that. Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() Well I'm tearing up now. The end of this chapter is very emotionally charged, and it's just so sad that this is what makes Kakashi break. |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Even tho I see it hasn't been update in a while and it doesn't say it's complete, I think I'll risk reading it since it was a highly suggested Kakashi centered fic |
![]() ![]() I knew it would end abruptly but i kept reading anyway. So well written, i loved every word. I'm glad it didn't end on a huge cliffhanger. Thanks for all the time and effort you put into this story it was one of the best I've read. |
![]() ![]() Omg that broke me! The photo album! Gah! Such a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow just wow... |
![]() ![]() I know this story has been on hiatus for 10 years now, but oh how I wish you would continue with it! It is SO GOOD. One of the best I have read in a very long time. Part of what I think makes a story reel you in is the detail. And, boy, do you have detail. I love it. You write these characters with such raw emotion and believable personalities that one cannot help but get attached to them. I am aware that this story will most likely not be continued or completed. But I want to thank you for sharing it with us nonetheless. You are an incredibly talented writer. It is my hope that I will someday get to read more from you. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No you cant abandon this pls update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, no idea whether you still read reviews for this or not (and I can't remember if I've reviewed before) but this is by far the best portrayal and expansion on the Naruto Universe I've ever read. Since first finding this fic I've probably come back and reread it 3 or 4 times. Your pairings are done beautifully and add to the story in a great way. While I know you're unlikely to update again just know you nailed every single character and added depth to the minor characters in a wonderful way! So basically - thank you for writing as much of this as you did! I still love it and tend to return to it whenever my interest in Naruto is sparked again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I've just re-read this story from the beginning again, still awesome! :) I love how you portray Kakashi :) I'm still so sad about his nin dogs dying but I was really excited when team 7 finally found out about the mission Kakashi was doing for those 5 weeks. Also, it's awesome that you've spent time on friendships that aren't always given much thought |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story Plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you brought these characters to life, not only Kakashi but also the other ones. I have enjoyed this story so much, even if not complete. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo! Kakashi's so awesome! He has the ability to be a legend! To be more than his father, I hope he can surpass him in here:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing, brilliant and an absolutely wonderful read. Love your plot and characterization. It's a pity you lost motivation for this, but it is one of my favorite story even so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aha! I finally found two things. Haha. But out of such a long chapter that is really amazing! 1. Using combat as a verb sounded off. "Combat them" instead of "fight them" came across as awkward when I first read it. 2. Dashes so close to other dashes? I found this very confusing to read. "Iruka and Raidou were about to start a long, boring shift, and Genma - practixally attaching himself to Raidou's side - along with Anko and her cousin - an aNBU operative with similar purple hair - had decided to tag along and tease their friends." 3. I have no idea why, but I never imagined the Hokage's office to be through the Mission Room. It seems like it wiuld need to be isolated from such noisy areas as they could be distracting (or give Tsunade's hangover headache a good torment). Anyway. I am loving this story and how you're writing Kakashi, especially in battle. |