This is cute! I love it and it's well written (soooo unbelievably rare!). I can just imagine Naruto saying, "Take him down." XD I always try and end in some form of constructive criticism but I read it more as a reader than a critic. Oh well. This is looking like a wonderful story.

a very intriguing piece that i cant stop myself from readng and waiting for more.

The grown-up version of Naruto. Emotional, so very well written and exceptionally good.

SOO AWESOME! :D

This story has a very good portrayal of Kakashi (the dept of character is amazing), its a shame that you've lost the motivation to continue this story. Since it seems it's likely that you will never continue with this story, could you possibly have a sparse outline of the story as to what direction it would have taken. Never the less it's a favourite of mine.

PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE START UPDATING AGAIN

I love this. So much. I am utterly in love with gritty ANBU life, and with Kakashi, so this fic was heaven for me... *starry eyes* Thank you for writing! XD

I had, you know, been suspecting, about the , though, I hadn't thought, like, I told myself it wasn't there.

But I can't say that now, can I?

I've heard of your fic recommended because of the awesome way you portray Kakashi. I must admit, it is true. You really nailed the guilt and humanity left of him, making him into a real person, with feelings. It's great to see his weaker side for once. And the setting is most likely possible, as well.

Though, I'm not so sure I can stand kakairu that much. Still, I like your writing!

Oh wow. That's pretty depressing. Then again, that's what makes it realistic-it's war. It's pretty well-written and the characters seem to have depth and layers, many many layers.

:)

I know it has been forever since you updated but I can't help but hope that a story with such a great premise and the sheer quality of writting that was used will be continued. If not then it is a shame. I have greatly enjoyed the story you have brought to the table here and hold out hope for more even if it isn't likely.

chakra as Naruto-neesan

I would just like to point out that when your refering to an older brother or brother-like figure you would use nii-san , nee-san is for older sister or sister-like figures. Great story so far.

Liberwolf

I really hope that this is continued. I read that you had lost interest in the Naruto series, and I can understand that completely. I have the same thing myself. However, fanfics like these bring something to the Naruto-verse that (in my humble opinion) far exceeds many of the things presented in the manga/anime.

I hope that you continue, as this is a brilliantly written work, the characterization is excellent, and you capture the essence of what a shinobi villiage, corps, and life is like.

If you don't want to continue for the sake of Naruto, fine. But I think the story you have begun has become something in and of itself.

Best wishes!

I've already read this. A long time ago. Now that ive read plenty kakashi fanfiction, i'm even more enjoying your story. Such good characterization is rare! Even after so many years, after so many things happened in the manga, your story still stands among the best. So, review to let you know this is still appreciated!

wow- the fighting scene was so nicely written! i could really picture it while i was reading it