Reviews for Silent Hill: Premonition
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 26 . 7/12/2005
Go you. That story rocked. I loved the way you tied it all together to give a truly Unique story. (cringes oh bad pun). I hope you intend to write further stories in the future. The work that you put into this shows in spades. A thorough job well done. TTFN

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Wolf
i-e-m-s chapter 26 . 6/30/2005
O.O...Uwaah! That's something I wasn't expecting! Creepy...lolz!This really is a good story till the end!Good job! *high five*
i-e-m-s chapter 23 . 6/28/2005
Uwah! Saikia! The plot thickens! It's very alluring and I can't stand up! My butt's sorta glued to the chair looking at the screen...lolz! You update pretty fast! Keep it up okie?
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 21 . 6/27/2005
Nice. Going from strength to strength. I really like the ties you have worked on here. A decent storyline and an atmosphere that puts the reader in the centre of the hill has kept me glued to this one. Please continue. I am starting to notice a drop in some of the detail in the last chapters. It would be great if you could keep the level of environmental and character detail up. Riddles good as always and a nice wee cliffhanger to top it all off. Read Fear as well nice gore description. Thats the sort of stuff i look for in a ficcy. Keep this story going. its worth it. TTFN

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Wolf
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 18 . 6/24/2005
Yes please do explain. THis story has pretty much gripped me every time i read it. And everytime I am compelled to read more. Great twists. I am really enjoying this story and its implications and I can't seem to find fault in it anywhere. Great work. Keep this up for the sake of my sanity. TTFN

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Wolf
Nianko chapter 18 . 6/22/2005
Wow, story,well writen and a fantastic plot.

NK
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 15 . 6/17/2005
Well don't you just move quickly. Its been a while since i read this delightful little story. It hasn't lost anything. More twists for the twisted. A wee bit confusing towards the end however it leads on as if those riddles will be answered soon so i look forward to that. It moves at a fast pace and the chapters are relatively short and because of that i feel compelled to follow on to see what happens. I can;t explain it but thats how it affects me. Good work on this. A couple of grammatical errors. ONe I noticed was in the first sentence of this chapter. It should be Ahead lay the amusement park, instead of Ahead lied. Apart from that i cant find fault in this. I liked the riddles. Hope to see more updates soon. Keep writing. TTFN

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wolf
i-e-m-s chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Wow! This is a really great story! Somehow, sorta strays away from the game but good nonetheless! I actually appreciated it soo much I made a fan art of Daniel and Unique!hehe!
Damaged1989 chapter 12 . 6/5/2005
NO! IT ENDED! NO! Please hurry and update. I want to read what happens.
Queen Sydon chapter 3 . 6/1/2005
James and Henry? Are they gonne be making cameos or what? Well, doesn't matter. I still love this!
Queen Sydon chapter 2 . 6/1/2005
Short but descriptive. You have a good thing going with this.
Queen Sydon chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Wooh! Awesome..and tragic. Great work.
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 10 . 5/25/2005
My goodness but this is a great story. I have just read from chapter 2 - 10 and i have to say I love what you are doing here by tying up the SH series into a sort of SH5 storyline. Good description, character etc. Like it loads and can't wait for the next chapters. Keep writing on this one. TTFN

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Wolf
W.S.Ravensoul chapter 1 . 5/20/2005
Oh yeah. I like the look of this one. Suspense, action and good pace. Great descriptions, good storyline. This should attract a lot of attention as this is good solid storywriting. I honestly can't find much to fault this on. Maybe a bit more descriptions on the surroundings but apart from that this is just Great. A nice way to leave it as well. I shall be following this story closely. Well Done. Keep Writing.

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Wolf
Servo chapter 8 . 5/19/2005
Well...I like this story so far.

I'm wondering, which ending are you taking for from Silent Hill 4?
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