|Reviews for Time|
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/23/2013
Lovely, great story, thanks for writing it. Write more please! Loved this couple! Way better than with the annoying Inuyasha
| Rook chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
This was the third time I've read this story over the years. I love it. So heart breaking yet heart warming as well. The ending is very satisfying, if bittersweet. Still a little confused with the whole subject concerning Miroku's grandfather and Kikyo, not sure what you were actually trying to reveal there. But still, a wonderful tale. I was moved to tears often as I read. Those are the best tales out there, the ones that tough your Orion's and make you sympathize with the characters.
| legioninabox chapter 10 . 3/27/2013
I am reading this in 2013, and I just...the final bit of this story really makes my heart feel light, somehow, and it's just wonderful.
| Sapphiregirl chapter 10 . 1/8/2013
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this fic. You did an absolutely amazing job. My favorite line-which stuck with me long after I finished-is, "He traded his life for mine. He traded his life, Mom, and never said a word." Made my heart hurt.
Thank you so much for sharing with the rest of us! Happy writing!
| Athena's phoenix chapter 10 . 12/31/2012
Naraku... Naraku as the CEO of MacDonald's (Wacdonalds, whatever...)? ...hehehe...
And then, (imagine this being narrated in an authoritative announcer voice) a MacDonald's commercial came on the television in the next room. And I fell over laughing. And my mom was like "It's that same thing you were laughing over earlier, with the villain, right?" I swear I was almost crying. XD
This story... It is... hehe...
Well, you made me laugh, and facepalm, and flail my hands around in upset-ed-ness.
(Upset-ed-ness. So totally not a word.)
In any case! I loved this fic! Thank you, thank you, for writing it! It's the first time I've tried this pairing, and you've already made me like it quite a bit. :D
| mfaerie32 chapter 9 . 10/8/2012
I'm glad mama Higurashi got a lesson in Humility and why not to jump to conclusions. I'm kind irked at her anger toward Kagome though. As a mom, she has every right to worry..that's a given, BUT the moment her 15 year old daughter told her that she wanted to travel 500 years into the past through the magical well in their back yard to chase after a jewel and fight demons and she said.."Ok", she lost the right to be angry about any danger she put herself in. I know it was integral to the plot of the manga, but in reality...I don't know ANY parent that would LET their 15 year old do that. I sure as hell wouldn't.
| Clau chapter 10 . 1/30/2012
I know you wrote this a few years back... but it's my first time reading the story. I absolutely love your characterization. It's realistic (well, within the frames of the original story). You didn't downplay the angst. It's an absolutely perfect job!
| MysteryLady-Tx chapter 10 . 5/13/2011
That was AWESOME I love Kag/Mir stories and there just ISN"T enough of them! It was a GREAT story!
| Jade Ice Fire chapter 10 . 5/9/2011
I loved this story! There never is any good Miroku/Kagome paring fanficts. This is deffinatly going into my faves.
| Shu of the Wind chapter 10 . 2/21/2011
That was beautiful and wonderful and completely plausible and totally awesome and I can't think of any more adjectives.
The characterization was absolutely fabulous.
Also, Miroku in a T-shirt and jeans...SQUEE!
| xXx.Taki.Aya.Miyamoto.xXx chapter 10 . 9/20/2010
lolololololol! Oh man, glad Aya read the whole way through... HAHAHAHA! Love the last line! LOLOLOLOL! Couldn't stop laughing, lol Aya still is. lolololol!
Oh and this makes Aya one of the later generations! D
| saku chapter 10 . 8/10/2010
Other than that youve made the mother such a controlling bitch this story is great. As I said, I just cant see the mother as you have portrayed her. Maybe you wanted to make her what a "normal" mother would be like but Mrs. Higurashi is a really gentle soul who trusts her daughter blindly with everything, thats what makes her so unique and likeable. Never once did she say that Inuyasha cant sleep in her room or would forbid her daughter to have sex before she starts college. This is Kagome after all, she was raised like a proper girl and is embarassed by a mere kiss. Shes just not the girl who would sleep with someone she really loves or before shes ready. Well, now with Miroku who is a man and not a boy like Inuyasha I wouldnt be suprised to see them as a real couple in a short time. He is irresistible.
| mynightshining chapter 10 . 5/29/2010
This was absolutely wonderful! I loved your use of time paradoxes, and I loved how everything slid nicely together. You did a wonderful job taking me from utmost despair with the first few chapters to light-hearted hope at the end. To top it all off, it was easy to read while still being enjoyable.
And, of course, WacDonalds! Ha!
Great, great work!
| actrivi chapter 10 . 2/7/2010
Many lol's! Loved this story :) Especially working in Wacdonalds. Really great mix of humor and angst. Love love love 3
| Scherherazade chapter 10 . 12/26/2009
I stumbled on this wonderful and entertaining story quite by accident. I've really enjoyed reading it. Well done.