Reviews for The Happy Red Prince |
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![]() ![]() damn. i was hoping that since u said Grandma knew about the prophesy ud have her make harry into some wack kung Fu kick ass so he cud deafeat Tommy |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find it hard to believe that this will be a seven story series, but i like the idea and i like your writing.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is your fascination with asians anyways, i dont mind, but hiromi, cho, kimmy? give the kid some variety.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the gayest Harry I have ever run across and I've read some fics where he's ended up with Draco! That Harry was less feminine then this one. This is fun to read tho'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank god, he seems to be a little less of a wimp. Hope you update soon. You haven't been around since N'Years Eve. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey nice story i cant wait to see what you do with harry will you make him dark but agisnt old volide or will he be with him ? well any way i cant wait till the next chapter on this story and and the other harry poter story you have but i have to go im at school so read ya later byb |
![]() ![]() ![]() You seem to be focusing unhealthily on the sex lives of underage children. I would recommend, as a friendly warning, to stop before it gets reported to the admins. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You may or may not recognize me as the reviewer "wb". Yeah, so, I'm a tremendous fan of your work, especially Dakaath. The articulate writing style tht you have been using for all of your fics is refreshing from the simplistic and uninteresting style of Rowling (even though she is a good writer). However, I also find this writing in the dialog. I know that Harry has a new life, but I don't think that any upbringing could make an eleven year-old that articulate. Even though I do not find this to be all that realistic, I do enjoy it. Now I must point something else out. Harry called Draco a philistine. This word has two meanings, one of which is recognizable in story. This is that it means a person of poor taste, barbaric, or even savage. the other meaning is a Palestinian. The word was created with the intention of making these two meanings synonymous. I just feel that you should lay off of the words that might offend anybody. So keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn! you got update this story or if not the dakaath story, they're both brillant! keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Great fic! I love the aristocracy element and class being a central plot element. Please keep this up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the style of this story. I hope you update soon again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story! What will the final pairing be? |
![]() ![]() Another great story from a great writer. I do love your Dakaathi story and felt inclined to read this great story. A masterpiece as always, and I like the references to the Dakaathi story as well. Please keep updating! ~{707} |