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Kaito is hungry wants to eat

Nice.

Dear author,

As interesting and slightly unfinished this story seems, I do feel that it is misplaced. Isn't this a crossover with Gundam and not Highlander?

- biblioholic

You need to come back and reformat this story to include quotation marks (" "), your story is very hard to follow/understand because of the lack of them; a little background wouldn't hurt either but you seriously need the proper punctuation.

Just a tip - you should indicate dialogue somehow. You can use quote marks or dashes or ... anything. Just make sure your readers can tell the difference between spoken words and narration.

Nice little crossover :)

I do hope you continue this it is very interesting.

update soon please pretty please

Please continue... this sounds like it has promise

Interesting start and different seeing as you have Harry being Immortal. Sounds like he;s a highlander variety. So how did he die? Hope there's more soon! How did he meet Duo?

Aww continue.

preist - I before E, except after C and in cases of neighbor and weigh.

Wow. I really like this story, and I am definitely hoping for more chapters. This is a really interesting outlook on Harry Potter and his (after)life. I can't help but hope that you will have him encounter someone of his kind from the past (who he might or might not have been friends with) who freaks out over seeing him again, and reveals what Harry's first death was. That would be so cool. Here's hoping for another chapter!

Ta,

Kin

sweet!

grins,very nice, please continue