|Reviews for Currently Untitled|
| David Fishwick chapter 2 . 11/28/2008
Please write more and thanks for a cool plot.
| Soccer-Bitch chapter 2 . 7/16/2007
love the story so far. i can't wait for more. _
| White Alchemist Taya chapter 2 . 5/17/2006
this is good stuff!
you should update sooner!
you can go places with this.
nice beginning to chapter one by the way.
| bbbbbbbbbbbbb chapter 2 . 5/16/2006
Hey! I want to read more, it's really nice...
I wanna know more about Krum and Hermione...
Love, that couple!
| Aradia-rising chapter 2 . 3/11/2006
But it was good. Thanks for the update, I love your fics!
| R Lucky Crayon chapter 2 . 3/8/2006
Don't feel guilty, you probably had writers block, but if you didn't have writers block, feel guilty. Oh and I have an idea for the title, how about 'Ravenclaw Girl' since that is what Harry reffers to her as.
| afangirl100 chapter 1 . 2/12/2006
Good story, keep it up!
| R Lucky Crayon chapter 1 . 12/6/2005
me loved it, it great, please update soon you rock my sox!
| crazy4thesun chapter 1 . 10/8/2005
Great so far, update soon!
| Aradia-rising chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
This is really cute, if you still have inspiration you should totally keep going!
| Kryzt chapter 1 . 5/15/2005
It's good... I'd like to find out who the Ravenclaw is though...
| frozenfire chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
it seems like a great story so far! i cant wait till the next chapter :)
| WordNerdtheThird chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Not bad. I think you have real potential here for a good fic. I would reccomend, however, that you find a good beta reader. Your spelling and general mechanics are pretty good, but you could do with a little bit of helpful commentary from someone who knows sentence structure and such.
You really should be careful with how you use your OC, though. As long as she stays left of center (i.e. not becoming the star of the fic)you should avoid the dreaded title of "Mary Sue" for your character.
I read your profile; if you still don't know what a Mary Sue is, it's a character, usually original to the fanfic, who is the ultimate in perfection. Everyone loves her, and everyone thinks she is the greatest thing since sliced bread. She has no flaws, and is often a projection of who the author wants herself to be. She most often has extra-special powers, is smarter than the smartest character in canon (the original work the fic is based off of), the most beautiful, and usually replaces Harry (in HP fanfic) as the "chosen one." Essentially, she is the ultimate annoyance to all readers.
(sorry for the long Mary Sue explanation.)
Anyway, I think this is a good fic, overall, and I would like to see where you take it.