Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of Astragal
Goose chapter 8 . 2/4
Nice story, but I have to speak about the animagus thing, particularly Ginny and Neville's forms. Those forms have obvious advantages, but they are not realistically suited to help when one thinks about it. The point of being an unregistered(or their ability being classified) animagus is to help them move about without suspicion. Having the form of an animal that isn't native to the area except within zoos would immediately raise suspicion. A lion and tigress running around Britain not attacking animals or being aggressive at all just screams "animagus".
hpfanscs chapter 18 . 9/27/2014
This is an excellent story, very well-written, with an imaginative plot.
Guest chapter 17 . 5/2/2014
The Wrekin is 1,826 years old.
It was made by a Wizard named Wargen who lived in Northern Norway.
Peter chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
Cho Chang is in Harrys year.
Talrond chapter 17 . 5/2/2014
Harry needs to defeat Tom Marvelo Riddle Jr.
not his father Tom Riddle .Stick to the right person when writing a story.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/30/2014
Her parents were Xenophilius and Serena Lovegood .
Serena Lovegood died at age 33 .
Agara chapter 6 . 4/29/2014
Gravediggers Pub Best Pub in Ireland.
Talrond chapter 15 . 5/1/2014
Harry still has one more trip to Hogwarts.
You forgot his trip back to Hogwarts from his Christmas Vacation.
Talrond chapter 14 . 5/1/2014
One flaw in this never planted false memorys in the French students only the Teachers and Head De Lacour would know Eric is not of her she would tell Harry.
Talrond chapter 13 . 5/1/2014
Lord Voldemort is not Tom Riddle.
Lord Voldemort is Tom Marvelo Riddle Jr.
Tom Riddle was a Muggle and Lord Voldemort father.
Talrond chapter 4 . 4/28/2014
Actually his real name is Tom Marvelo Riddle Jr.
Talrond chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
I remember this story now.
Talrond chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
n yet g uh oj oj oj hhh in uh
Guest chapter 11 . 3/12/2014
Cho likes younger guys...
Guest chapter 2 . 2/14/2014
Well that escalated quickly.
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