Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sword of Astragal
Phazex chapter 1 . 1/12
nice story but needs a rewrite in my opinion
Phazex chapter 1 . 1/12
nice story but needs a rewrite in my opinion
Wert Yu chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
Wednesday June 14 2017 4:30 a.m.
harryjamespotterblackphoenix chapter 2 . 6/14/2017
Harry never lived 11 years under the cupboard. Harry went to the Dursleys at 15 months old ,not on the day he was born. Do the if your gonna write about Harry Potter do your research.
harryjamespotterblackphoenix chapter 1 . 6/14/2017
Needs more Pepsi.
Hercules Black chapter 18 . 6/9/2016
It was an awesome story with a nice plot. The Harry/Luna pairing is just great. I Loved reading it.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 5/31/2016
Wonderful! So special.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
Interesting beginning.
BillBrink chapter 18 . 5/30/2016
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Alex chapter 18 . 4/14/2016
WHOA...This is so SUGOI :DD thanks for this nice story,i must admit that when i first saw harry potter series i kinda didnt like Luna,well not you know but i only though she is weird and that but after i saw that was big mistake and honestly i wanted her to end up with Harry but im happy that i saw this story and that my dream is true now :)
K chapter 2 . 12/9/2015
This is one of my all time favorite stories. Luna and Harry just fit so well in it and then you add Grimmy and it becomes perfect.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/7/2015
Harry act crAzy then get mAd that people treat her as crazy. As for Ron not sure why people think Ron tease hermonie They are haveing fun teaseing each other. I feel most of Ron bashing is the movie and to much fanfiction
Blazeb79 chapter 18 . 7/14/2015
Good story.
AlexisJames chapter 18 . 6/10/2015
I've read this story, and the others that you've posted, and really enjoyed them. Hope to see more from you.
Goose chapter 8 . 2/4/2015
Nice story, but I have to speak about the animagus thing, particularly Ginny and Neville's forms. Those forms have obvious advantages, but they are not realistically suited to help when one thinks about it. The point of being an unregistered(or their ability being classified) animagus is to help them move about without suspicion. Having the form of an animal that isn't native to the area except within zoos would immediately raise suspicion. A lion and tigress running around Britain not attacking animals or being aggressive at all just screams "animagus".
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