|Reviews for Forbidden Tears|
| FannyOctopus chapter 1 . 8/30/2016
| Greywithrain chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Hello, do you know that I really love your stories? I have a feeling we have lots of similar interests. Even though I have never really watched much of Yu-Gi-Oh, I find myself absorbed in reading your fics: "Come What May" and "Dreamcatcher" (did you know that I used the same name for one of my hotmail address?). They are beautiful to read about. I have always been fascinated by tales of Ancient Egypt and the tombs of the Pharaohs so I was delighted to find how well you have depicted them. The atmosphere and moods are absolutely amazing. I loved every second of reading it. Although I didn't expect much of the sequel (they usually don't impress much), I find myself unable to stop trying to find out how the plot develops :D
lol. it seems i have been reviewing more on those two than "Forbidden Tears". I don't tend to review much since laziness (bad as it is) is one of my trademarks, but after reading this I just had to. Where are you from? I was so shocked on finding out that you are writing are fic on Lady White Snake I thought it must be something else you have in mind. I haven't thought about this story since I turned 11. Before then it was always on my mind. I loved the story. Or the idea of it at least since I don't fancy the main guy much (I try to ignore him most of the time :P). He's so bookish and... lame... so lame he's on a whole new level by himself. I noticed this was written almost three years ago and if there is any chance I hope you haven't given up on it. I really like how you are reworking the plot so far. The bamboo scene was my favourite and I always found the swinging-hip scene funny.
Even if you really can't be bothered I'd just like you to know that I like your style and enjoyed reading your stories.
| DreamWriterColabs chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
this is very interesting, now I've got to see the movie, assuming I could find it... You've got great talent!
| Sugarmoe chapter 1 . 12/3/2005
This is such a good fic...well beginning! I realy hope you continue with it...and Bakura/Yugi together is an unusual coupling, you hardly ever get it so ...well...unsure of what to say that O haven't already said...well done *smiles*
I really hope you continue, it's a really good read...
| 435177 chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
I think that's a great place to end! Lol, "Twist twist twist..." that's great. And it's a very intriguing story. Are you going to expand on it? Because this is really cool...
| Bennoda4evr chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
o interesting story, I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update asap!
| ciacconne chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
/drool/ all the flowery imagery's making me drooly... What can I say?
I'm freakin' impressed. X.x Your story is original, I don't even mind the couples. As for the characterizations, me loves it. Yugi is so damn cute by being seductive. Yami is so brothery. Seto is strict and Bakura is..well, Oo Bakura?
oh man, I can go on and on about how much I love this story already, but X.x i'm pretty speechless right now, so I'll leave it at that, and say, "Kick ass writing you have there! XD! And keep going! XD!"
| animesoulxD chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
OKAY LINDI! You're up next! (I decided I'll read the most recent fic you, Pysche, Crimson Eyed Dragon, and Todo have up so far and review~ It'z a start! _;;)
guess what...I love your flowery writing style to! XD This was totally amazing! The imagery, the descriptions! FWOOSH! totally mind-blowing! :D And Seto is so hot in here...::faintz:: omg...can't stand the sexiness! itz too much! ::diez:: lolz
I find your ending for the first chapter to be the most amusing and interesting thing ever~ XD PPlz too busy staring at Yami and Yugi, pish pervertz! XD
| Telpei chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Aww, this is so cute! I love it _ Yay for flowery writing style hehe! I love how Yami and Yugi interact and as always, Seto is damn sexy. You should put Bakura in more of your fics, you're SO good at writing him! *happy sigh* I want to read the next chapter soon! (please *sweatdrop*) I can't wait to see what happens.
Oh yeah, Aniki is a really cool word! hehe. Love it! _ Keep writing! Good luck with meeting your deadline...I know you've got a lot on your plate of late! If you need any help let me know...tho I dunno what I can do *sweatdrop*
| Shadow over Egypt chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
A little odd perhaps... but good. As for OC-ness, it's only really Yugi that's a little different. The rest are fine. Anyway, please update soon? I know you must hear that a lot, but hey, what else can you say?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Yay, finally had time to read this. A very good start. The myth, and the movie, sound very interesting. I must admit, I'm a sucker for fiction based on history and myth. And even if its been 'translated' through the movie director's vision, it is still exciting to see your 'artist's rendition' of the story.
Well, I'm looking forward to more!
| Desidera chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Ohh, I loved your writing style in this one! I don't actually know many Chinese movies (and obviously I can't watch them in Chinese) but my impression of them matches the atmosphere of your story perfectly!
For descriptions, I loved the one of the Bamboo forest and the one of the Magnolia tree and the wind...
I liked the scene changes and the way the scenes somehow seem to intertwine, and I also like the introduction of the four main characters - great job there!
The story sounds very interesting and I really like it! Looking forward to seeing pairings *g*
| Dreaming Bunny chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
i like ficcy. it's an interesting concept. i also like how they're snake demons and how Yugi likes to dance with the hot guys.
Can't wait for more YamiSeto interaction!
| supernerd3333 chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
It's a great fic, and I like everything about magic, also the pairings. Bai Niang Zi is one of the greatest Chinese romance stories ever, also one of my favorites, but truth to be told, I am not that fond of the movie. Yes I have watched the movie. The story is about the purest love one can find on earth, but the movie doesn't really follow the story line, for I have heard the story told by old people also. The movie added so many jokes that in my opinion are pretty stupid. Most of the modern movies have destroyed the purity and dignity of love present in all Chinesse romance stories. (Sorry about that, I am an old geezer who like everything in it's pure and original way. It's not flame, I promise. I really like your story.)
Is Bakura Fa Hai? I love that you described him as a good guy. Most people hate him. But I think he is just a righteous god trying to rid the world off demons. Sure he is dense, sure he messed the whole thing up, but he doesn't deserve to be banished and hide in crabs for eternity! That's just not fair! By the way, I don't remeber anything between Fa Hai and Qing She in the story. Did you creat that? I think that would make the story much more interesting, love and hate stuff like that, but Fai Hai is a monk O_O.
Are you going to make Yami die? I hope not. And how are you going to make Yami pregant with a baby? Have you ever been to Hang Zhou? People say the Broken Bridge with Melting Snow and Lei Feng Ta Reflectin in the Lake are 2 of the 10 most beautiful sceneries in Hang Zhou. (Those names sound really weird in English.) I wonder how are you going to describe them in the story. You language is always so rich and flowery. I wish I can learn a thing or two from you about describing scenery, although I have to admit the dialogue sounds much better in Chinese.
OK, I know I am rambling, but it's so rare to see a fic based on Chinese mythology before, not to mention one of my favorites. Anyway, update soon.
| kai chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
it's nice and u wrote a yamiXseto fic. there are so few of them on update soon