“—he did not think that Bail thought he would harm a child in cold blood”
Don't remember slaying those younglings, Anakin?

really Vader not murdering a child in cold blood.

"and even now he did not think that Bail thought he would harm a child in cold blood"

uh... *points to the pile of mutilated younglings*

I found you fic and have greatly enjoyed it sad to see it hasn't been added to in a while though. do you have plans to continue or do you have sujestion of other similar fiction to this one?

The idea of a dark side avatar like Luke is scary good. The funny thing is Palpatine would actually approve.

A husband to replace a father for greatest? Sadly it would take some kind of Jedi to get approval. Other wise when guy meets daddy and is asked his intentions there are really no right answers or thoughts

I have two problems here, one you blatantly changed the visions anakin experiences cause he only saw padme die. Or how she died. Also when anakin went to yoda he didn’t give the full context and only informed yoda that he has had visions of someone dying not who. In all honesty it’s kind of tiring about how much you are sucking off the dark side and bashing the light. Hell by the time Vader found Leia he didn’t even blame or hate the Jedi order, he blamed himself for literally everything that happened.

Dead?

Fascinating story, I’m sorry that it never continued past this.

man complete

very good story i hope you are still around to keep going on it.

Really loved this. You were able to write a good Leia Vader story while still keeping both of them in character. I read all of it in about 1/2 a week, and it saddens me that ypu will probably never finish this (it has been more than a decade after all).

My favourite chaptet was probably the one with Obi-Wan. He's my favourite character, and I love the conversation between him and Leia (still don't know why he hd a green lightsaber tough).

I hope nothing bad happened which prevented you from finishing this story, but if you ever happen to read this, I eagerly await a new chapter, even tough it will probably never come.

I loved this one so much I hope you finish it someday.

No matter how many times I read this I still hate this part as it establishes Luke as somehow stronger in the force. They're twins for fuck sake, they should have the same strength in the force, and be just as talented (all else being equal) as each other, i.e. Luke should never actually be able to catch Leia up simply because she's head such a massive head start in learning, same as why Luke had an insurmountable lead in canon, he had a giant head start.

It's just so fucking stupid, and incredibly sexiest too.

I was actually hoping this story would focus a bit more on Vader at least involve him more.