Reviews for Heart of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() Why the fuck is this bitch calling vader uncle fucking d |
![]() ![]() ![]() If this ever comes back it would be nice to see Vader get that EU Upgraded suit. I would also like to see our best blue boy Thrawn. Ahsoka would be a nice call back too, and a good way to show how Vader has changed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It always annoys me when I reread this that you made Luke the far more powerful of the two, they're twins for force sake, they should have equal force potential, what ends up separating them should be quality/quantity of training, mental state, experience etc, it's why in legends/expanded universe (where Leia was actually trained, unlike the new canon why for some fucking reason Leia never bothers to learn) Luke ends up the more stronger, because he had far more training then Leia, and better considering he was taught by Obi-wan and Yoda where Leia was trained by him at the same time he trained other all the while Leia was raising children and working for the New Republic. She simply never had the chance to match him. Whereas, here, its the other way around, Leia should end up by far the more powerful. Equal Potential, but Leia will have done far more to realize it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such an amazing story! I know it's unlikely to ever be finished, but know that we appreciate what you did write for us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is brilliant, awesome, cool, cute, fascinating, unique, thought-provoking, sweet, critical, sexy, addictive, dark, light, and utterly badass. In short, I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how after the "It sparked something in him" You started reffering to him as Anakin insted of Vader. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You most likely aren't with us any more but I hope you one day show back up to finish this wonderful story. Good luck with it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi. I'm looking for a story this good. PM me if anything like this story exists on . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story ! What a sad thing to let it unfinished. I hope nothing bas happened to you. Anyway thanks for everything ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this this story once before a few years ago, so when I started to read this story again, which since I first read was and still is one of the BEST Starwars Fanfictions ever, I knew that I wouldn't be getting an ending, but now I am at the end and my only emotion is sadness, I'm sad because this story is so awesome and I can't get to see it in its complicity. If you should ever read this review after all the years of no updates, let me tell you one thing, THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND YOU BECAME MY FAV AUTHOR BECAUSE OF IT! -Love Tim |
![]() ![]() According to your timeline, Leia should be seventeen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() let him Live |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! This is such a great ff! |