|Reviews for Phantom|
| blackcat686 chapter 4 . 3/14/2006
Love the story!
| AttackingHentaiChibisLoveFluff chapter 4 . 9/25/2005
YAY AN UPDATE! FINALLY!
| AttackingHentaiChibisLoveFluff chapter 3 . 8/4/2005
AW! He killed the little boy...
| crossfire chapter 2 . 5/11/2005
i dont get it but i like it plz update soon
| Baron Hausenpheffer chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
I really like what you have so far! Vincent is a great character (one of your creations, I assume), and someone FINALLY portrays Anderson as a decent guy. 'Bout time...
Anyhoo, keep up the great work! _
| AttackingHentaiChibisLoveFluff chapter 2 . 5/10/2005
? I AM CONFUZZED! (in Irish accent)
| AttackingHentaiChibisLoveFluff chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
I LOVE IT! CONTINUE OR DIE BY EVIL, DEMENTED HAMSTERS! *holds up little brother's hamster, Hamsty* SEE ITS FEROCITY! *Hamsty nibbles carrot*
| DreadNot chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
I'll be interested to see what plot develops.
Nitpicks: Excessive use of ellipses. Subductingly is not a word. When one dies, one is dying, not "dieing." In other words, there are numerous typos and misspellings which detract from any story you attempt to tell.
Get a person who has an excellent grasp of English spelling and grammar to give your work a pre-read before you post. Additionally, if you can, try to get a beta reader who has a good grasp of Hellsing canon. Those things will help you to improve the quality of your work, which should always be a goal in writing, no matter how accomplished you are.