Reviews for Forfeit
sovandeprins chapter 2 . 4/19/2017
I dont know if this will be continued but- I am so very interested in the idea of it that I cant help but hope! Its the first story in a while Which has captured my interest, to be perfectly honest with you. If you are still here - Lovely writing.

And, of course, Thank You for writing.
bartlettpear chapter 2 . 11/4/2016
This is fascinating, I was filled with anxiety they were all going to die in the previous chapter. This chapter was interesting, I like the time jump and look forward to learning what Naruto does when he doesn't stay in the village, is he a wandering Hokage?What happened to Sasuke, and if Hideko will become a good healer. I'm hoping she does.
LucidKren chapter 2 . 9/2/2014
This had an interesting concept. What they did changed them fundamentally. Very intriguing.
Titan of Saturn chapter 2 . 1/25/2010
O, interesting! I actually wrote a story (shameless plug: Aftermath) where the Kyuubi chakra kept Naruto from aging, but I love that here, because of what happened in ch.1, it's affected Sakura as well. Hopefully Sasuke too, though Sakura reducing it's potency might mean it had less affect on him. Can't wait to find out! Good job and good luck on future chapters.

shadow-inu14 chapter 2 . 9/16/2007
what is going on I am so confused. Please update soon i would like to know what happened and what will happen.

RofS chapter 2 . 8/28/2007
An interesting beginning - I can't wait until you expand more on the idea!
SnowCharms chapter 2 . 7/17/2007
I wonder who's married 2 who...n where is Sasuke anyway? But all in all...this is definitely an interesting fic...update!
Mad Hattress Skylar chapter 2 . 6/10/2007
PAMS(Please add more soon)
JamieGlasgow4 chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
Huh? What happend to Kakashi? I don't get it... my english skills just suck these days..*sigh* The chakra molding(?) was pretty creative and descriptive though. Great fic
Tsukashi chapter 2 . 9/4/2006
This story is very well written! The way the characters are portrayed is realistic and interesting, drawing the reader into your tale. I look forward to reading more.
Tian chapter 2 . 7/18/2006
Ah, this fic has SO MUCH potential. Please continue? :)
FrozenOnyxPhoenix chapter 2 . 5/19/2006
looks intrsting though I really dont understand the huge ass time jump between chapters. Can you explain that a bit? THanks.

Liz chapter 2 . 5/10/2006
Aw, are you just going to leave me there? It'd be really nice if you could manage another chapter. I'd really love to see more.
Funky Nassau chapter 2 . 5/3/2006
As per usual, you deliver your story gracefully and with a delicious cliff-hanger. Why is it always suspense with you? Le sigh.

Nevertheless, this is yet another magnificent piece. Bravissimo.
Constructor chapter 2 . 4/30/2006
slighty confusing, but it'll probably clear up in folowing chapters...please update soon.

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