WOW good sotry.

it was written perfectly. it was long enough to keep my interest but it had enough of eveything in it to keep it fomr dragging on.

Way to go!

Excellent! Love the story... Congratulation. Looking forward to your next stories.

Amazing. Few chapters back made me tear up. Literaly. 8D

Lovely story. It was well written, few errors, but nothing that really took away from the meaning of the story. you might want to read through it and find some of the inconsistencies that run though it, but other than that it was marvelous.

I'd give it a 9.5 out of 10

I think I caught this story years ago! And it was up until after kagome save sesshomoru from that witch sora's spell. To have been able to finally finish this has been great. Thankyou for a wonderful read. ;)

This is such a beautiful story!

I had a great time reading it! You are a very talented writer!

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Very descriptive and suspenseful. Good chapter to start with ~

Good job ~

One of the best story of all time keep up the good work.

OMG! this story was so good! i loved it so much! hey can i use some of the names in this story? i really really like some of the names!

Bonjour,

NICE STORY I LOVE IT!

IT WAS GREAT AND EVERYTHING WAS GREAT THE THEME,PLOT,CHARACTER description etc...:)

Congrats on writing such a beautiful piece!

-C

luv it:) soo far;0

I just can't get into the story. Maybe I was harsh, considering the first chapter was really good, but I still can't get into it.

Okay. I thought you've been editing? You have terrible comma placement, occasional double negatives, you said heave instead of heavy, you often use than when then is proper, and Shippo yells up to Kagome after YEARS but instead of answering she turns around to chat with her brother, then leaves for a while, comes back and THEN answers him? Your writing style is also very matter-of-fact, confined, and bland.

I'll read the next chapter, but I hope you prove me wrong. :/

i love the story!

*drools* epic!