awesome chapter! W

great chapter! sad but good

BRAVA BRAVA BRAVA!

wow i have never read any fanfic story with such an amazing battle! i am so happy and full of mirth and excitement! lol but i couldn't really get a clear picture in my mind of what kagome looked like in her true form! i was a little bit confused. lol your great!

WAH! POOR GOME!

P.s. At the end of that last review, for some reason it bleeped out the word I used so I am gonna replace it here. It was meant to say tough or something along those lines, so yeah. Sorry my computer is weird. lol

I noticed your comment at the top of this chapter that you didn't you were very good at lemony romance, and I just wanted to say that in my opinion it was very well written. That sort of thing is difficult to write for most people I think, but this was as tastefully done as it can get as far as lemons go. So don't be so hard on yourself! Also, this is my second time reading this story, and its just as good the second time around. I absolutely love it!

okay, i lost for word. one thing : AMAZING

that's a very good story and you have written it in a very good plot. i'd like to read this again

well thats lovely. he kisses her...just as she's passing out?

i know this os also general but when is the rmance gonna come in?

i like the strtegic kagome, i hope she's in charge of the rescue mission. its refreshing to see a woman take charge like a general.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I usually don't read long completed stories but this one kept my attention through the whole thing! Continue writing wonderful stories so I can read them please!

oh! That was really wonderful! Doesn't need a sequel at all. _ I was worried there for a while. O_o Reminded me why I've turned away from unfinished pieces. *giggles* Very interesting story concept, and the twists were great.

Might want to watch in the future for errors that slip past spell-check and even grammar checks: to/too, your/you're, mixing plurals with possessives, & some spelling errors or typos that resulted in viable words that simply did not fit. Oh, and at least one 'had went' which should either be simply 'went' or 'had gone' -sorry, it's a pet peeve of mine. Common errors for the most part.

Overall a great story! Loved the added characters, even the baddies who I loved to hate.

Thanks for writing!

love it very much is so wonderful i wish it hadnt ended but in a way glad it did but again i say i love it

so cool, yet sad, i like it