Reviews for Sunset Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Nice ending but kinda rush i want more shessy and kags scene |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah I’m so glad I read this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. Read 3 times and keep in my log to read another time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm. I will have to think about this chapter for a bit. I was surprised Kagome didn't mention the woman she saw to the others. And I really can't imagine them taking along a fourth wagon that they hadn't procured themself. Why didn't any of the youkai chase after her when she got on the horse and the horse ran off? I would think the bear or the dragon, especially would have since they don't trust her, or Kisho, since he DOES and would have worried about her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an exciting chapter! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time! You handled the rescue masterfully. I really loved your descriptions of the other youkai as Kagome thought about befriending them and learning from them. I am usually not a big fan of OCs, but I am truly enjoying yours. The lion youkai is very interesting, and I really enjoyed the way he and Kagome worked together to save his son. I am so, so impressed with your creativity and talent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great chapter! I loved the way Kagome appeared unexpectedly to help Sesshoumaru, and then to aid the fight at the castle. Her reunion with Miroku and Sango and the conversation was Kikyou were so well done. I especially enjoyed her speaking up at the meeting of the youkai to discuss a rescue attempt, and her choosing the bear youkai to accompany them. Perfect! I love a powerful Kagome who isn't outrageously powerful, and you are really writing her perfectly. Moving on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have completely captured me with the uniqueness of the plot revealed in this chapter. I can't wait to read on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awe I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...did NOT see that one coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s lovely |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good |
![]() ![]() ![]() AweI love kisho as kagomes papa. They are a perfect fit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter |