Reviews for Sunset Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter! Natural storyteller ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn...this was an intense chapter. For real...cried like 5 different times and it’s only chapter one. Bravo! ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story, thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() than is used when making a comparison example I'm more qualified than her then is used to indicate something that is to come example i eat and then i sleep please consider this in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() well shit I had a inkling that was gonna happen ...but damn still a bit shocked with this plot twist |
![]() ![]() Omg I was hooked at the second chapter SesshyKag all the way loves it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT!; the lemon was well worth the wait. i'm glad you didn't describe the first time sess and kags had sex. that would have taken away from the delicious lemon later. please try and finish your other stories so i can read them as well. keep up the great writing. c'ya' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ughhhhh I love it! it was an awesome and interestimg story! but I have to agree with what of some people here's said about the need to focus more on sesskag's heir than rinkohaku's wedding xD There were some typos and grammar errors but you really did a great job with this story! So thank you for writing it! ciao~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my all time favorite sesshkag stories and that will never change. I must read this at least once year, thank you for writing such a wonderful heart warming story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ten years have passed in the feudal era, so how is it that Rin, the human, has not grown up completely while Shippou, the demon, is fully grown? Youkai grow up slower then humans, so how did that happen? They were around the same age after all..., well, size-wise and behaviour-wise not in actual years. So, however did this strange growth-spurt for Shippou and lack thereof for Rin happen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh, she gained some allies there :) Also, I am really curiosu to see what exactly the blue light was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe...a very interesting idea you have got there :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I understand that you wrote the AN in bold, but why the whole chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, great story. You did magnificent. Claps Claps boom boom you did awesome. Thanks. My heart skip so many beat till now and I did cries like rain. I love this pair so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really enjoyed thank you for sharing |