I'M SO EXCITED FJSJDFLLSD.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I love it already.

Love love love! I couldn't put it down

There was that nice piece when Sess and Kag were in Sess's office after Ozeki left but then you summarised an important event: When Kag got attacked. I don't understand why. There should have been more detail. The way in which the chapter ended was also very peculiar. It seemed like you left out something. There was no conclusion for the chapter and there wasn't a cliff hanger it was just not finished.

Good work!
Love it *o*

Really liked that story a lot :) thx for sharing. ..

The epilogue was kind of intriguing. ..and a little confusing...

Greetz sani

This is SO good so far. I'm glad I clicked it!

The story isn't bad but I just feel as if their love came out of nowhere. It would've been more realistic if there were more intimate interactions between the two before the whole "she loves you and you love her back" thing.

Wow! Just wow. A great story remains great no matter the passage of time. Brilliant!

This was an amazing story. It was so much more than I have expected it to be. I was enthralled from the first chapter and loved the way you wrote the characters. Sure there were a few grammar errors and typos, but they were few and far between. I really loved how well written and how engaging the plot was. This is definitely one for the favorites.

I've read your story over the last several days and I have to say that I enjoyed the majority of it. You do need to work on proof reading more carefully as you have a lot of grammatical errors that hindered my comprehension at times. Besides that, my only other critics are that I felt towards the end of the story, Kagome was becoming too "all powerful" and dangerously toeing the line of becoming a Mary-Sue type character. I thoroughly enjoyed her power and strength in the beginning and found it refreshingly different, but it became over done towards the end. Becoming the first and only miko-demon hybrid that can also transform into a semi-full demon state and is the second being ever known to wield a poison whip like Sesshomaru, in addition to being related to every majorly powerful character is a little extreme and makes her too perfect/powerful. In addition I didn't like how you focused so much in the beginning that she trained for several years to perfect her powers and fighting skills, but puts little to no effort into controlling and mastering her new, unheard of abilities. I also didn't enjoy the very end of the epilogue. I found it confusing. Why are you summing up Rin and Kohaku's life when Kagome and Sesshomaru are the main characters and the ones the readers are more invested in? Was that paragraph stating that one of Rins descendants is also related to Kagome (her mother's father?)? I'm not 100% clear. I would have really liked to see Kagome and Sesshomaru's story wrap up: their children, their ruling, are they still alive 500 years later, if not how/when did they die? I think it would have made a better conclusion to wrap up the main characters instead of focusing on Rin and Kohaku who are very minor characters and play a small role in the story.

Besides that I really did enjoy the first 20-so chapters. You're plot was very difficult to write and there were a lot to subplots to keep up with. I believe that if you were to rewrite the last few chapters and focus more on Kagomes character development with her new powers instead of making her an all powerful, perfect being this story would be perfect.

Please write another sesshkag story , you are really good!

This is such a great story , its got everything ! , Love it , i hope to read another one soon :D

I'm sorry to hear that you won't write anymore I will miss your wonderful stories I hope you are doing well and I like this chapter

I know you wrote this ages ago but a review is a review.
The only problem I find so far is your use of "your" and "you're" being incorrect.