Reviews for The Founders' Heir |
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![]() ![]() I bet it's Tonks |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very well written; proper pauses between the breathing pattern of an injured Snape that really immerse you in the scene. I liked the 'And he was aware no more.', it certainly added some depth. I'l get back to reading now. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! Loved the school's reaction! xD I hope we get a more detail scene of what the Gryffindors think of Darion! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! Oh boy, this is going to bring a lot of questions and more suspicion. The Gryffindors are not going to like the color of Harry's wings. They better not do anything to him! D: And I love that Harry as a Griffin as a familiar! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! That moment with the snake is probably going to make Hermione suspicious, I wouldn't be surprised if she thought Darion was speaking Parseltongue to calm the snake. The fight was amazing, I loved how it went! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! I knew they were going to mistrust Darion, I just hope they don't decide to act out on those feelings. And I cannot wait to see Harry battle, I wonder how much he's improved from canon. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok Where is the rest ... Great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! I love that Harry is apprenticing under Severus, the fact that he is will definitely put him under a bad impression from the other Gryffindors. This ought to be interesting! xD Also love that him being Harry isn't going to be revealed right away. Love the stragety behind that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the chapter! The jump between the scenes were a bit confusing, but I loved the entrance Harry made! xD Cant wait to see everyone's reactions to this new Harry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting! I love how the story started and how everything went! I am so disappointed that Lucius managed to get away alive, after what he did to Harry, I cannot wait to see his death! So glad that Severus was able to get away! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your not goibg to update. Are you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() VOLDEMORT I DUNNO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing story and well written. Pity that you've given up on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story though i'd have thought voldemort would be the obvious first guess/instinctive reaction he knows harry better than anyone else |
![]() ![]() I'm fairly sure harry picked up that habit from hermione XD |