Reviews for The Founders' Heir
Sof Potter chapter 18 . 8/23/2017
I bet it's Tonks
God1643 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
This is very well written; proper pauses between the breathing pattern of an injured Snape that really immerse you in the scene.
I liked the 'And he was aware no more.', it certainly added some depth.
I'l get back to reading now. :)
blaleblelelel chapter 7 . 6/24/2017
Loved the chapter!
Loved the school's reaction! xD I hope we get a more detail scene of what the Gryffindors think of Darion! :D
blaleblelelel chapter 6 . 6/23/2017
Loved the chapter!
Oh boy, this is going to bring a lot of questions and more suspicion. The Gryffindors are not going to like the color of Harry's wings. They better not do anything to him! D:

And I love that Harry as a Griffin as a familiar! :D
blaleblelelel chapter 5 . 6/23/2017
Loved the chapter!
That moment with the snake is probably going to make Hermione suspicious, I wouldn't be surprised if she thought Darion was speaking Parseltongue to calm the snake.

The fight was amazing, I loved how it went! :D
blaleblelelel chapter 4 . 6/23/2017
Loved the chapter!
I knew they were going to mistrust Darion, I just hope they don't decide to act out on those feelings.

And I cannot wait to see Harry battle, I wonder how much he's improved from canon. :D
gutenacht chapter 43 . 6/23/2017
Ok Where is the rest ...
Great story
blaleblelelel chapter 3 . 6/23/2017
Loved the chapter!
I love that Harry is apprenticing under Severus, the fact that he is will definitely put him under a bad impression from the other Gryffindors. This ought to be interesting! xD

Also love that him being Harry isn't going to be revealed right away. Love the stragety behind that!
blaleblelelel chapter 2 . 6/23/2017
Loved the chapter!
The jump between the scenes were a bit confusing, but I loved the entrance Harry made! xD

Cant wait to see everyone's reactions to this new Harry!
blaleblelelel chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
Very interesting!
I love how the story started and how everything went! I am so disappointed that Lucius managed to get away alive, after what he did to Harry, I cannot wait to see his death!

So glad that Severus was able to get away! :D
DeathlyDreamshade chapter 43 . 6/18/2017
Your not goibg to update. Are you?
DeathlyDreamshade chapter 20 . 6/17/2017
Reecy chapter 43 . 6/15/2017
Intriguing story and well written. Pity that you've given up on it.
PwnerofHeroes chapter 21 . 6/13/2017
good story though i'd have thought voldemort would be the obvious first guess/instinctive reaction he knows harry better than anyone else
Guest chapter 26 . 6/5/2017
I'm fairly sure harry picked up that habit from hermione XD
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