Reviews for Atomic Galaxy
Barry I. Grauman chapter 22 . 8/24/2005
I KNEW things were going to revert to "normal", 'MikariStar'! Betty's description of

the destruction of most of the universe, her parents and friends was very depressing.

{I'm still coming to grips over the end of "Triangle"..} I'm pretty sure she cried over Penelope's demise as well, much as she can't stand her...odd that PURRSEY would be the one that "reweaves" the time thread by aborting Maximus Sr.'s computer virus

and deleting the "Shadow Mist" for good. Well, he screws up Betty's life occasionally, why not for the good of all living creatures in the universe?

Don't apologize for the "campfire" was quite appropriate that everyone should be together just before time began to "straighten" itself out...I'm quite sure Minimus grumbled, "I'm not a scratching post, either!" when Purrsey dug her claws a little TOO far while pushing his head around.

Now, I wonder how you're going to end this stirring saga without duplicating scenes

from "Evil Idol"...just before the surprise party (possibly having Mom mention SHE invited Penelope because "she and Betty seem to get along so WELL together at school"? Or her objections to Dad's magic act? "Do you HAVE to use the disappearing box?"/"Are you kidding? It's my best trick! The kids will LOVE it!"/"Well, don't say I didn't warn you.."/"About what?"/"If YOU disappear, you might not return...")? Just before Maximus' contest? Or the heart-to-heart talk Betty and Granny have AFTER the party, where she goes into a little more detail about her Galactic Guardian past?

I await the anti-climactic conclusion! ;)
Kitty chapter 22 . 8/23/2005
great chapter
Julayla chapter 22 . 8/22/2005
I'm glad Atomic Betty's cat changed history. And I believe we now found out the true reason for the "Evil Idol" episode. Let's hope it goes well.
Barry I. Grauman chapter 21 . 8/22/2005
Well, at least we all know how Maximus feels about Minimus NOW! Sure, he needs him as a sidekick and occasional punching bag, physically and mentally {cf. Alan Brady & Mel Cooley}, but deep down, Maxi DOES need Mini as a companion because no else will put up with his ego and his rantings and his obsessions about controlling the universe.

They were made for each other...;)

So, THAT'S what the "Shadow Mist" is, eh? It's going to be a long, drawn-out fight, I know it, 'MikariStar'...and the BIG brawl is yet to come!

Julayla chapter 21 . 8/19/2005
Yeah, thanks...sometimes, I only log in just to leave some "Username Reviews Only" reviews on the stories I like to read. Anyway, let's hope the combo works for all of their sake.
Kitty chapter 17 . 8/18/2005
I think I know who the "mystery" villain is but judging by your stories you're full of surprises so my guess might not be right
Kitty chapter 11 . 8/18/2005
Great chapter!
Barry I. Grauman chapter 20 . 8/17/2005
Well, there goes MY theory shot to evil Maximus clone, of course! Who could have ever guessed such a hideous possibility? But how COULD Maxi even stand


That star necklace...I'm pretty sure everything will be "normal" again, because events somehow have a way of..."regenerating" themselves, 'MikariStar' I'm sure the breathtaking climax of all climaxes will unfold as I think it might...? And I'm sure it's a whopper! ;)
Julie Riley aka Julayla Beryl chapter 20 . 8/16/2005
The link to the fic is at my profile. Just click on the signature, then go through the profile to find the link. Don't worry, you'll find them.
Kashira chapter 15 . 8/16/2005
Kashira chapter 10 . 8/16/2005
great chapter!
Skaia chapter 19 . 8/16/2005
that happens to my server too a lot of people who don't have aol have trouble communicating with aol O.o;; great chapter! update soon!
Skaia chapter 18 . 8/16/2005
cliffhanger how will they get out of that XD
skaia chapter 17 . 8/16/2005
poor maxi's scared then again so is everyone ;; *huggles plushie*
Skaia chapter 16 . 8/16/2005
this keeps getting interesting
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