|Reviews for Two Halves Of A Whole Heart|
| Crystin chapter 1 . 10/22/2012
Pekkek!you kidding!Its very short!
| hydeandjackieforever20 chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Hey is this story abandoned? I really want you to continue this story it sounds so different from the rest! Please continue! PLEASE!
| tokyo girl 05 chapter 1 . 7/26/2005
thank you for putting me on ur fav list though im sorry too say im not gonna finish it i lost interest ,but im doing a new one at this moment you can finish it if you want i wont sorry bibiXX
| evryluvsmisty chapter 1 . 5/26/2005
I like the way you made them fight. It sounds really cool. But be careful. If i find out it wasnt some drunken mistake from ash that got misty 'knocked up' i'll be gunning for you. I'll find out where you live and...lol i'm just kidding. Anyway i can't wait to see what you meant by her being pregnant. Cause i always see misty waiting for Ash.
Every 1 luvs misty.
| Tokyo Girl chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
LOL I love it so much. Iam also working a POKE'MON fan fic too. Its Mew, who is turned human and Mewtwo seeks her out, but please I would love to see more on your fic :D Amy
| PinkCamellia chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
Not bad... but i'm kinda confused. What's the situation? Is Misty pregnat? But it was pretty interesting. I hope that the next chapter is longer!
Ash And Misty all the way!
| Buff Norris chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
I'm not one for cursing, but if your are gonna put that in there you should up the rating. But the plot sounds interesting.
| Luisa Perez chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Well weird begining. But like it update soon.
| Blood Demons chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Interesting, though detail would be appriciated...nothing makes a good story like detail, but good job anyway, though I'm not sure that they would say that to each other but it's your story