Reviews for The Window Was Open
LilyPSuzeSMiaM chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
That was...heartbreaking. I literally broke down and cried. These kind of fics(where Jesse moves on) always leave me like this. *sighs*
whatremains chapter 1 . 5/15/2008
wow. i guess? :D i was about to cry about Jesse moving on :( (why would Jesse move on when Suze shouted at him some some evil things?) when i read the "And the cold was killing me."

haha )) nice one! you have such talent! :) :D
oirishgoddess chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
ohmygod. how AMAZING is that? brilliant poem. you obviously have a LOT of talent.

that last line! wow. it pretty much encapsulates all of suze's feelings about that time. you got it in one. WELL DONE :)
scarredvines chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
Wow...depressing, sad...yet still good. I really love your story/poems. ~Silver
deliciously forbidden chapter 1 . 3/13/2007

so sweet from the window thing in the books

but your poeme is exellent

felt the crush and the pain inviding me

felt so bad...poor suze

but i hope he didn't leave her forever (hope it's just a bad fight that's all, i love jesse too much)
Gravity's Rainbow -Nina chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
*sniff* wow...







Dannie Tomlinson chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Callieach chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
Sad. Beautiful. Loved it.
Trapped Rabbit chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
That was superbly wrote.


Trapped Rabbit

missy mee chapter 1 . 12/29/2005
wow, a very well written fart
singinshowtunes chapter 1 . 12/14/2005

you have SUCH poetic talent!

that's really depressing, though...

oh, what do i care, it rox my stinky sox n e way!
HighHeeledShoeLover chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
I think that was an amazing poem you wrote. And take it from me I don't like many poems. I think you are a great writer so keep up the great work.
Kawaiidustbunny chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
don't you ever have any Jesse and Suze ones? grr.. thats okay, i still like this one. although i am purely a person who likes happy endings.
iluvjds chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
lolz u r so weird... needed a 1-shot and came across this'n in m'e-mail... sounds tearjerking. WOW! as promised! practically crying! could NOT have been conceivably any better! s'sad! megaprops, lolz!
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