Reviews for The Darkness Within
noxenrom chapter 7 . 1/30
Shitfic with oversimplicistic plot
Guest chapter 10 . 1/25
Its a shame you haven't written another h/hr story that doesn't involve such a screwed up Harry, because I love the way your write them.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/25
This story is really disturbing because of the incredible quality of your writing, your brilliantportrayals of each character and dialogue, stories with plots like this are usually writen very amateurish and not taken seriously, but you have the talent of a professional writer.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/25
I like that Hermione revealed her feelings for Harry but it feels hollow considering she hasn't paid him any attention this whole time Harry has been torturingpeople, kind of like how his relationship was with Ginny in the books

Oh well, still, very interesting story, now I'm just hoping you don't have Harry kill Hermione
Guest chapter 7 . 1/25
This is really good, would be even better if there was form of romance between Harry and Hermione but I still enjoy this
Guest chapter 6 . 1/25
interesting
Guest chapter 5 . 1/25
Wow I really love this story and briliant plot, nice job really
Guest chapter 3 . 1/25
This story is going alarmingly too goodto be true in regards to a perfect story of h/hr for me! Its rare to find really well written and suitable Hogwarts era fics thatI enjoy
Guest chapter 2 . 1/25
really good story its kind of fast paced but I like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
This is really well written so far
BookButterfly2 chapter 16 . 1/3
I enjoyed your story. :)
Deathcrow chapter 5 . 4/27/2017
Okay I have to stop here, this is just way too hard to read. I hate your overly melodramatic and wimpy Harry who doesn't confront his problems, showing all the worst qualities of Snape. And then concocting this utterly ridiculous scheme with no chance of success if it weren't for the author of the story willing it to happen. "Slytherin Plan"? Oh please. Did Harry suffer some kind of brain damage? Even Canon Harry wasn't this stupid when he decided they needed to wear the Horcrux around their necks.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2017
This story had potential! Key word: had. The way you began was really enticing with dark dream Harry had. But this chapter was pure fluff I'm done with this story. Sorry but I want a truly dark story with ultimatums, hints of romance and tribulations, and your story is nothing like that. It's not a bad fanfiction it's just you made it seem like this was going to be really dark, so essentially you click baited everyone. If I were you I would change the genre before you get any more angry reviews
ironhair chapter 16 . 11/14/2016
So...at the end, Harry was evil? He wanted to rule the world as well?

What about voldemort's horcruxes?
ironhair chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
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