|Reviews for Natural Causes|
| Namantos chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
this is so sad...
the shortness of it, and the single dialog, it almost brings me to tears...
| Himura-Dumbledore chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
Interesting, I've only recently become an FF fan after watching advent children the movie, I stumbled across your username by accident as well. Very original!
| Purple Power Ninja chapter 1 . 4/8/2006
I was kind of sad thinking about Reno getting old...
I really liked it!
| canibal angel chapter 1 . 7/4/2005
wa so sad :( its touching
| Eric and Derek chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Wow. Loved the ending! So sad! I dunno 'bout anyone else but I've never really thought what it would be like wnen the characters got old, at least not further than Vincent not dying because of the Jenova cells. Great ideas and briliantly written. Keep up the good work. PS Like the name!
| Verdot chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Nice concept, seeing a Turk die of old age as opposed to violence. And the ex-wife bit seems rather realistic with Elena.
You used spellcheck! Vast improvement there.
My only beef is with sentence structure. It's rather choppy in some areas... just doesn't flow.
Stories like this are fabulous. I suggest working more on themes like this; you have a pretty good grasp of the concepts.
| happyunderground chapter 1 . 4/30/2005
that was so beautiful very very sad.