|Reviews for Shootout|
| JDoggy5 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Yes! If your reading this listening up! I have a friend name Tegan! He's my best friend, my buddy, my brother... And there's this girl I love, her names Janita, I love her and she lives me back! And some more friends that I can't say there banes right now, all of them... I would give my life just to save them, I'm nothbg but they have lives ahead of them, I would block that shoot and save one of them, if your reading this, would you do the same thing? Would you try to save your friends life? I know I would
| StarStreakedSky chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
I would be willing to protect my friends like that, but I'm ashamed to say that I'd be too freaked out and scared for myself to do anything :\
| watchalookinat chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I w0uld d0 the same thing as what chase did t0 ashley, I l0ve my bestfriend and I am willing t0 die f0r her
| Goldenheart11 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Oh, wow. Chase Lussier may your brave soul Rest in Peace.
| Inkstains of azure chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
this is what im scared of. i cant even imagine what would happen if this took place in my school. while i was reading this it felt like it was happening to me. i thought about everyone i have classes with and my teachers. i swear i could hear them screaming. if this happened to me during study hall and the shooter opened fired, most of my friends would die as well as the teachers. thats i super scary thought. whould my friends save me? yes. would i save them? yes, i would do anything for them and they know that.
please dont let this happen to anyone else.
amazing story. there should be more like this one.
Inkstains of azure
| Denalien chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Well actually i don't know what to say to this one!
| Chanceless chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
LOLOLOLOLOL. This was written so long ago; I almost feel bad for reviewing it because it will probably make you convulse in shame, and I only say that because I know that's what -I- do whenever someone rants over any of my age-old work.
BUT I'M RANTING. SHUT UP AND TAKE IT LIKE A MAN.
I love how terse you made some of the action. Very brief, very cacophonous, and almost a little bit confusing. I got chills when Starfire wondered if this was what dying was like and why wasn't she feeling any pain, because I actually had a dream in eighth grade that I was shot at a lockdown and I was wondering that if I was dying, where was the pain? -Insert Twilight Zone theme-
Anyway. Very short, bittersweet chemistry between Dck and Kori. I love what's said by not being said in him kissing her, and AHAHA "My Last Breath"-that used to be one of my favorite songs, and it's still a top for me on that album.
And yes, I know the feeling of being willing to do ANYTHING for a friend, including jumping in front of a bullet. Good on you for loyalty.
| Sheena Dunlop chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
| Matters of No Consequence chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Hm...hey! I would have done that for my friends anytime! I love them! Hm.. I love this story! It seemed so..uhh...real.
| SaffireStarz chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
it probably is...
this story was such a tragic story...
i literally cried. beautifully written.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
This is so, so beautiful, dammit.
It's one thing to read about this kind of thing in fanfiction, but it's a completely different issue when it actually happened. I bow to you. You really caught the feeling of terror, and though we may never know exactly how they felt, you did a wonderful job in trying to describe it to us.
| dani chapter 1 . 12/31/2006
that was sad :[[ i cried. it was heavy but very good i like it even though he died, but in a heroic way
| clueless dummii chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
o.m.g. im cryin. i really am. that is so brave and so sad.. i swear 2 u im cryin rite now. u were rite. that was heavy. IM CRYIN. its that sad. its an ordinary day and then BANG ur lyf is over. i SWEA am cryin. i cant believe that some1 would do that 4 a friend. its beutiful and so noble. im c-c-cry-ry-in-n. sniff sniff. did that really happen 2 some1. gosh. i would feel guilty i mean ur best friend gave up his lyf for urs. o.m.f.g. fu-. i would b so freaked if that happened 2 me.
robinstarfirelove4evarobin and starfire
| Chaltab chapter 1 . 10/6/2006
Just a warning, Sushi, song fics are no longer allowed here. I'm not gonna report you, but some jerk might.
| megs649 chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
Aw, that's so sad, I cried! I can't believe this actually happened! Very good story, you're such an amazing writter.