Ah...

You can't just leave her chained up against a wall for months w/ spider goo all over her.

I hope you haven't given up on your story.

I am enjoying it so far.

Happy writing!

That was freaky! Legolas needs to come and find her soon!

Okay, I'll leave a whine. lol. Too short! Me wants more! Suspense-choking-me... Want- Legolas-rescue-hurry! UPDATE! please! I love this story!

I think that being chained up and having a big hairy spider on my back and not being able to flick it off would really freak me out! I am not afraid of spiders either! A great chapter, short but sweet, better than nothing! I look forward to reading the next one which I hope will be longer! This is a great story, I'm enjoying it loads and hope you update soon! Tata!

Wow...this story is EXCELLENT! It's one of the best Leggy romances I've ever read -congrats on a job well done. I love your little PotC illusion 'wait for the opportune moment'. You may or may not have conciously done that...I do stuff like that all the time! Well anyway, this is too good of a story for you to abandon. I'd LOVE it if you updated soon... I really want to know what Legolas sees in the mirror! I wish they'd find each other soon so you could write more romantic scenes!

P.S. The whole 'feeling the other's emotions' thing is way cool. It's so sweet...and so is Legolas. :D

Please updat your story soon! It's too good to not be continued!

~Tari~

HI! Thanks for reviewing me! I like your story here. Now I am positively dying to know what Legolas would see in the mirror. Update soon!

well LOTH fics arnt usually in my reading list but you have been so kind to review for me. so far this story sounds like it will be awsome, i cant wait to finish reading, later though its like four am here and im tired. and i cant punctuate or lean proper grammer or spell right writi now, see what i mean.

Kira

Good chapter - looking forward to finding out what Legolas sees in the mirror.

Are we going to find out soon exactly why Saurman took Arianna? There must be some particular reason why he went to all the trouble of abducting her and then keeping her.

Love and hugs, Sarah x

going well... needs more action!

this part: "i almost pity the fool who took arianna" reminded me of Mr. T and i started cracking up!

hehe well anyway, good chapter! update soon!

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Elves don't call each other by nicknames; it would be rude. Names are sacred to the Elves; to call someone by only part of their name would be saying, “I don't care enough about you to say your name.” Hobbits were the only creatures to use nicknames in Middle-earth.

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Navaer Lalaith

Yeah! Another chapter! I can't wait for the next one! I am really happy you updated.

Who is this master Saruman keeps saying owns Arianna? And where is she going to go? What about Legolas? When will he go after her?

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

i like it. want more.

i'm kinda confused. it seems like the beginning sections are about the present, but then near the end, it seems to go back to the past... it talked about gandalf in the beginning and ended with his fall...

please clarify!