That was so exciting, I loved it!

I loved it that Snape finally found his balls! Hahaha!

Wow, I am glad about Lucius, but Draco too? I feel so sorry for Narcissa, her only child dead!

I see that Snape is looking to suffer because of his false pride, because in my view he has nothing to be prideful about, the git!

There has to be somewhere else they can go, no? I would also think that Sirius' Will should be read soon, which ought to give Harry some serious coin.

Thank you for sharing your story, it was great fun to read!

i do like that there is times where there's character bashing but also times where he acts like friends with the same people

this text format is terrible

I don't understand the positive reviews. Silent casting is learned by Hogwarts students, all competent wizards know it. He's a 5th year so silent casting now is not that impressive and is certainly not an indication of power. Neither Harry nor Bella are interesting characters. It could be that the start was too abrupt. There's no build up or hints, just BAAM! Harry is an edgelord and Bella is a poor victim.

I’m laughing

Perfect ending thank you for this wonderful book I absolutely loved it

The story was allright, I liked the necromancer Harry. I didn't care for this Harry's personality though.
'Oh, someone says something I don't like, let me remind them on every occasion that I have no qualms about killing them. While I'm at it let's also say how much of a cold-blooded bastard I've become.' A bit much in my humble opinion.
But overall a decent story, thank you.

Would've given this a try if you could have putten the bare minimum amount of effort to not have your characters OOC in their actions and dialogue within the first few paragraphs of the story. This was extremely disappointing, and it doesn't matter if the other points of your writing are acceptable, you failed at something that is fundamental to storytelling. It takes just a *little* more effort on the dialogue or setup to a story to make things believable. It also doesn't help that Harry cusses like an American to show his anger, which is not in line with the baseline character of Harry. You have to make the changes like that gradual, or it will seem demonstrably unnatural.

Your dialog is too forced and ridiculous it is in no way believable and makes the story impossible to read 3/10

Since your German I’m not gonna criticize your grammar issues, your English is way better then my German, but did want to also point out how Bella basically swears herself to Harry for no reason, and Harry just trusts literally everything she told him at face value even tho he has no reason to