Reviews for The Dark Witch and the Necromancer ENGLISH
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 2 . 5/4/2022
I have a bunch of issues with this story so far

A) why the fuck would Marge insulting his parent be enough for him to cast the Cruciatus curse, when Bella killing Sirius wants

B) you just, without any form of explanation, made Harry WAY more powerful then he is canonically or then he was in the previous years

C) you provided no explanation as to why Bellatrix could all of the sudden fight against Rodolphus’ control of her and defend one random girl

D) in the first chapter, Harry hates him m all his friends and Dumbledore for NO REASON, like they warn him that he needs to stay in the wards and and they won’t send traceable letters to his house so he can’t be found, and he just hates in him, and just randomly screaming about Dumbledore after learning about the self defense

E) the odds of him just randomly going batshit crazy, torturing his relatives, having the ability to obliviate them (which there is zero explanation as to how he can do that), and just running into a pax of death eaters duking it out, just down the road, while ‘definitely evading the guards he was sure was therethat also apparently some how missed the death eaters) are so astronomical it’s obviously just plot progression

F) again with the fact that everyone just seems to say everything out loud for no reason, like stuff that makes since to think but makes zero sense for him to say to random strangers (much less people he’s loathed like Bella) such as the whole ‘that’s what they call me (meaning Potter) or sometimes freak or boy’ like he never even told Hermione or Ron that, why the fuck would he just walk up to Bellatrix (who he totally would have just killed, given his new mind set and his opinion of her) and tell her

G) as I previously said, this new Harry you made is cruel, vindictive, and blindly wrathful, there is no reason whatsoever that this version of Harry would torture his relatives, burn the letters of his friends and mentors and tell them to fuck off, massacre a bunch of death eaters, then politely stand by and ask Bella what she’s doing and why he shouldn’t just finish her off, and be like ‘oh by the way, you’ll be proud to know I can cast a crucio now!’ Like he would talk about some charm with Flitwick, no this version of Harry would see her, immediately notify Bella of his capability to crucio ppl by using it on her, then kill her in revenge for Sirius.
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 1 . 5/4/2022
Ohhhh so…. fifth year
ArachnidHiveMind chapter 1 . 5/4/2022
Wait is this not third year
bobel1990 chapter 23 . 4/14/2022
Realy Cool Story from Start To finish.
As a German i have often the Problem that a Lot of M rated fics could use more swearing but only the Germans can do it right :D.

Loved it realy
i will read your other English one!
After more than 8 years reading in English , Doing it in German feels Totaly wrong.
Thanks for awesome Story!
Axccel chapter 1 . 1/27/2022
A good start. Silent casting is common in the books and movies alike, though. If anything, it’s the norm for adults.

Why does every writer refer to many spells by their incantations instead of their names? And why does all of them get the Reductor Curse and the bludgeoning one wrong? They don’t cause explosions. The one whose incantation is Bombarda is simply a force of kinetic energy. The Reductor Curse is the disintegration curse. If I remember correctly it is described as causing things to flash blue and then, well, disintegrate into dust.
Kamishiro Ryuu chapter 20 . 12/26/2021
How I'm tired of the drama, where everyone is offended by Harry, and then poke them with a nose in shit. But this chapter really liked. :)
SGKaisa chapter 23 . 10/29/2021
oops, wrong fic
SGKaisa chapter 23 . 10/29/2021
I'd go with something like "The Great Reunification", "The War of Reunification" for most historians, "The Great Restoration" for cyrodilic historians, and "The Second Conquest" by disgruntled (probably ex-thalmor) historians in reference to Martin being the second Dragonborn to conquer Summerset from the Ruby Throne
Lord Of Domination chapter 2 . 9/20/2021
Its fucking annoying when author keeps making new paragraphs in the middle of a sentence
TupanHD chapter 23 . 3/21/2021
Epic! This story is pure greatness. I enjoyed every chapter of it. There is not many Harry and Bellatrix stories done right and this one did it almost perfectly.

One of my favorite Harry Potter fanfic.

Read it! You won’t regret it.

Thanks author for this great story.
TupanHD chapter 22 . 3/21/2021
Truly great.
TupanHD chapter 20 . 3/21/2021
Great chapter. Harry and Bella interactions are the best hahaha.
TupanHD chapter 10 . 3/21/2021
I like dark Harry. *grin* Especially with Bellatrix by his side.
TupanHD chapter 8 . 3/21/2021
This is great so far. I am really enjoying this story.
TupanHD chapter 2 . 3/21/2021
Nice
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