|Reviews for Horses of Balinor|
| bluephoenix65069 chapter 2 . 9/5/2009
interesting. i like it so far. what happens next? :)
| CalypsoSoul chapter 2 . 7/26/2007
oh way cool idea! amy's comic relief is hilarious! so funny! keep going, this is cool. and Balinor are some of my FAV books! )
| anna chapter 2 . 2/15/2006
Very funny... please write more!
| RidingPeacefully chapter 1 . 2/2/2006
Your story is very cleaverly done and I would love to read the next chapter.
| Eolith chapter 2 . 9/4/2005
Do you mean for the horses to be real, or just comical? I suppose if you're aiming for the latter you are achieving it... One thing though, I don't think 'passaging' is a word... and when Amy 'trots' up to the post it rather confused me. I was like 'Wait... Amy's a horse?' Then I figured it out. :D
| Eolith chapter 1 . 9/4/2005
It was a fairly well written piece of work, but I do have a few suggestions:
1. There were too many little comments made with the parentheses when thier contents could have easily been woven into the story.
2. The part when Frankie nudges Amy because of his mane doesn't make sense either. Horses don't have feeling in their hair, so he probably wouldn't mind it... unless she was pulling hard enough to unbalance the muscle on his neck, then it wouldn't be comfortable for him. The other thing is that in order to hold on to a horse's mane one has to be walking slightly behind the horse, letting it lead the way. If Frankie were a coward he wouldn't want to move, and he probably wouldn't respond much if Amy tried to lead him by his mane.
| amys mum chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
this is a very stupid story - amy get a grip - i'm joking! Love Mum
| Emma chapter 2 . 6/10/2005
A mental clinic would be in high demand for amy, but is she TOO MENTAL for the clinic to keep her there? Cool story guys :P
| Lightfoot chapter 2 . 6/9/2005
Very nice. I see how this story is coming together. Keep writing!
| Avril chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
This is a very funny, weird and exciting story, Well its not really that weird, i just put that to annoy Amy.
| Emma chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
WOW ! that was awsome... pippa, you really know how to make a story come to life... I'm STILL waiting for next chapter...
| born2read chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
kinda boring, you should add some excitement!
| chloe chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
dat was an awsme stroy guyz it was real funny i loved it! lol
| Lightfoot chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
No bad for a start! I can't wait for the next installment!
| VinnyRoxyFrankie chapter 1 . 5/1/2005
Just incase we get no reviews...well, us, that was a great story! Keep it up and update soon! By the way you two are the coolest people ever!