|Reviews for Developments and Complications|
| FanFiction.Net's Bounty Hunter chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
| Thug-4-Less chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I like it. The Colonial Marines attitudes were done pretty well though I think they would have been a tad more professional when they were seconds away from a possible firefight. I also like the fact that they didn't have the latest weapons and armor but on the other hand I would think they could have at least had upgraded weapons and armor. Maybe they did and you just didn't include it. Anyway, glad to see that you're still doing your Imperium thing.
Now if only we could get Bombie back in action.
| X-Over chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
Intersting crossover story you have here. As for the Admiral, is this Admiral Farlander the same character that appears in those old X-Wing computer games as well as the Jedi Farlander in the New Jedi Order novel series? Please let me know. Also, I hope that the Imperium of Man has the forsight not to shoot at a potential ally (i.e. the Sentient Coalition) no matter how distastful that may sound for them. Please keep up the good work. Thank you. :)