|Reviews for Broken Mirror 1:Rid me of this human FOREVER!|
| Endless Strategy Games chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Sad to say pal, but as short as this chapter is I think you've already made 2 sizable mistakes. The idea has some promise, but...
-When turned into a gargoyle, Elisa thought she had always been a gargoyle. Therefore, I doubt she'd be bothered by Puck being unable to return her to how she was.
-When Puck turned the city to humans Demona was outraged that Puck had given humans "The gift of being a gargoyle." Demona would be livid that Elisa wasn't returned to normal, especially since it would make it easier for Elisa to romance Goliath.
| Kardas the Destroyer chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
A good plot. Just need to work on your grammer a little.
| goliathelisashipper chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
:D I really liked this story.
| IsisMoon chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
| GargoylesRule chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Nice. Great idea to alter the story. Please update soon!
| powder78 chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
Great start! I've been looking for a storyline like this. Keep it up!
| StEaLiNgThESuN chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
I really like this story! i love stories where elisa is a gargoyle.
| Black Wolf chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
That is a great start, please continue! If you do I'll be your friend. LOL!