|Reviews for The Hunter and The Prey|
| Zuza chapter 24 . 11/12
It was hard for me to read Zuko as a bad guy...and I honestly hoped that it will have a happy ending...gosh was i wrong.
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/10
Hi, I'm really enjoying your story! I just wanted to talk to you about the word "retard" I don't know about where youre from but where im from its incredibly offensive and degrading and I was wondering if you could please change it? So far I love everything else about your story but this word really upsets and hurts me Thanks
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/26
Just going to say it right now. Youve probably realized but you portray the characters really OOC. It kinda irritates me that Katara has no strength of her own when throughout the series she's demonstrated remarkable courage and ability. When Zuko was running after her, she couldve drawn water from literally (anywhere) and frozen him to a tree for a little bit even if she had a crush on him. Humans are not so weak and if you like someone, youll melt into their arms regardless of what shit they've put you through. I dont get why Katara cant seem to look at him say "i hate you" and stick to that for more than a couple minutes. But whatever. Your story is really good, well written, realistic in everything except a female's strength. Also zuko might be arrogant but what he wants more than anything is his father's acceptance. His getting drunk on power is incredibly OOC.
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/31
So far im loving this, i started readin the sequel but when I read that well, it was a sequel I came to read this and I feel like you did an amazing job, I feel like you couldve done so so soooooo much more if youd finished seeing the series before writing because of the character stories and new characters like toph and azula but thats only my opinion. Hugs and kisses for youuuuuu
| Chris chapter 24 . 8/9
One, you're so cool.
Two, I couldn't be more honest to say that I cried and sweating the whole time.
Third, Zuko scared me when he's so obsess with Katara
Four, Nevertheless I still love this story
| Udontneedtoknow chapter 24 . 7/9
That's...FUCKING NOT THE END!YOU ARE HEARTLESS IF THIS IS THE END!YOUR KIDDIN ME RIGHT?!L!?
| Unknown chapter 23 . 7/9
WTF AUTHOR...U ARE LYING SO IM NOT YELLING BUT U GET WHAT I MEAN BY PUTTING THESE IN CAPS
| Udontneedtoknow chapter 16 . 7/9
Author please tell Katara this "GIRL OPEN THAT LITTLE HOLE U USE TO TALK AND TELL ZUKO GOD DAMMIT! U ARE FUCKING WITH ME AT THE MOMENT IF U ARE GOING TO KEEP HIM IN THE DARK!LIKE COME ON OR AT LEAST LEAVE A FUCKING NOTE AND LEAVE WHEN HE AINT LOOKEN FOR THE LOVE OF BOOKS,PEACE,FAMILY,AND THIS FUCKED UP KIND OF A WORLD!
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/9
Okay dearest author ok let's skip the being nice sentence and let's get down to the question(drum roll )is Katara going to tell Zuko or is she,ummm going to leave,or she going to tell him after a month and act dumb about not knowing?I ask this I know imshould just read but hay it's a question.
| Luna Deathstroke chapter 12 . 7/9
Okay dearest author before I read the rest of your amazing story ,aye I put out that Zuko could now make everything better?Thats what I thought so in time he'll make peace and everything some what normal?
| Unknown chapter 11 . 7/9
Yikes that's a way to end it good no details I don't know what I would if I happen to come across THAT.
| Udontneedtoknow chapter 10 . 7/9
It's okay author I'm an innocent like u and I've read things...(blushes and starts sweating )th that many p people would consider...well u get it so yeah,I understand and I'm an author of a kind and think u timed it perfectly!
| Udontneedtoknow chapter 8 . 7/9
I think the sane part of her was thinking,so yeah,remember,remember.
| Udontneedtoknow chapter 7 . 7/9
As they say BLOODY HELL!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/9
YIKES!THAT IS NOT WHAT A GIRL SUSPECTS TO READ!