Reviews for Grief, Deceptions, and Hope for Freedom |
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mumphie chapter 28 . 3/24 Did Harry and Neville ever find a truth potion that works on occlumens (perhaps with a babbling and compulsion part) or a way to make the revealing potion nontoxic? Did Harry ever get to speak to a lawyer about the custody paper? Did he ge3t the tent in time? Did he set it up in the Dursley's back yard? What are his plans for the Dursleys? He owns their home, will he make them pay back rent? Will Remus be part of Harry's payback, or is he going to be a block? What were your plans? I have so many questions and hopes for this story. Please see my other comments! ;) |
mumphie chapter 10 . 3/24 Doing yet another re-read. Boy do I wish that you had gotten enough fodder for your muse! So well done, so well woven! Sigh, and yet, it is an unfinished opus... |
blcoachmac chapter 25 . 3/21 How many chapters do you think this will be? If you finish? |
blcoachmac chapter 18 . 3/21 Gonna be interesting to see what you have in store for punishment for Dumbledore! |
blcoachmac chapter 11 . 3/20 I like the story and your premise! I see it has been 12 years since you updated. I hope you are well and may continue at some point! |
Quillpen1701 chapter 1 . 2/9 This is a great story! I wish you would finish it. However, if you can’t- will you at least write a paragraph or two on how the story ends? I for one would like for neville’s parents would wake up. After they get the patronus pals… |
ak chapter 30 . 11/14/2023 This is a fantastic story! Thank you so much for writing. If you'd ever consider picking up and sending a few more chapters, I'd be glad. |
ak chapter 24 . 11/13/2023 "Nothing has been fixed by staying silent." - fantastic line |
ak chapter 14 . 11/13/2023 Love "Patronus Pals". Inspired! Now I am hoping to see them in more stories ... |
BeyondTheDive chapter 30 . 7/17/2023 This is such a fun, interesting take on the "Harry Wises Up" theme. I know it's been over a decade, but I hope you might find the muse for this one again |
wiebenor chapter 30 . 6/19/2023 You'll have to forgive me for cursing, but... Damn you! Why is it that it's always the good ones that are unfinished? Seriously though, even though it's uncompleted so far, and will probably remain abandoned, I would like to thank you for writing what you did, and I'll be following this just in case you ever decide to work on this story again... |
Duchess67 chapter 30 . 4/5/2023 Oh my, so Harry is going to be stuck with those antlers for a while,? |
Duchess67 chapter 29 . 4/5/2023 LOL Oh my gosh... Whoopsie? |
Duchess67 chapter 28 . 4/5/2023 The boys were right, the weirdest things can be perfectly legal and common sense things illegal. The magical world is nuts! |
Duchess67 chapter 27 . 4/5/2023 Oh how I hate writer's block, hope yours has long since cleared up! |