Reviews for Grief, Deceptions, and Hope for Freedom
frozenwands chapter 3 . 5/4/2005
Great chapter I'm glad that you have ron and hermione in character, i think ron is jelous, but decides to play the part of best friend for now, and hermione is not very aproving that sirius told him to spend it on brooms and jokes, i think they're informing Dumble about harrys activities and mail since he isn't outright blocking it..yet, any way keep it up

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Alan Wilks chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
Nice second chapter, like where this is going! Eagerly awaiting your next chapter,

Alan.
lmill123 chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
You have a great start to your story and I'm looking forward to your next update. I loved the advice Sirus left for Harry, especially about Dumbledore. Whatever the Potters left to be sent if Harry is in prison for more than two weeks sounds like it would place Dumbledore himself in prison and posibility Fudge also. I like the bit about the lawyer's help to protect himself if he kills Voldermolt. Maybe the lawyer can have a magical contract signed by the ministry stating that whoever kills Voldermolt won't have any reprisials against them without some great loss.
frozenwands chapter 2 . 5/3/2005
Another good chapter i like the idea of the interlibrary loan book, it is a great idea that I've never seen before, I'm glad harry got some of his parents through their diarys, and I'm glad you made sirus suspectfull of dumble, and i'm also glad harry has more than one house to go to, but won't dumble know where they are since they used them all during the war? anyway i gotta go

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frozenwands chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
hi good start it's short but almost all stories beginings are short I like the fact that you have harry show some emotion over sirius, i've seen too many where he doesn't greive or he is swallowed in self pity i wonder what's in the box, hopfully something that will help harry any way good story and keep it up

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Star Mage1 chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I wonder what Harry is going to do.
Alan Wilks chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Nice start to a story, well written and interesting. Looking forward to your next chapter,

Alan.
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