|Reviews for Little Darling|
| hipgnosis chapter 2 . 11/11/2006
This is fabulous. I enjoyed both, and the humour in Chapter 2 was great, but my favorite part was how in the first chapter, you captured the moment and looked at it from all angles, and showed us how amazing and perfect it was by being REAL, and messy and hurried and imperfect, letting us feel the character's joy without being sappy. Really excellently written. Great descriptive flow.
| Lightbluechocolate chapter 2 . 10/15/2005
Your writing is very good but the entire story, and the chapters themselves, are too short. i crave more...
| CinemaGal77 chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
aww. everything is so nice. wuts gonna go wrong?
| Wonderlandleighleigh chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
*giggle* Yet again, very sweet. I love it.
Mommy feeds him? ;) Rory cooks? Wow! Go her!
| misslove852 chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
this is so cute! well written and funny and i love it! update soon!
| smile1 chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
Loved it once again.
Bye, smile :-)
| music4mysoul chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
Aww this story is so sweet! Great work, continue soon!
| Bittersweetbloodbaby chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
I'm sure you've heard this before, but this seems longer than it really is. It's a whole story. It's something I read, didn't review because of time constraints, found again, read again, and this time I'm leaving a review. Please write more of this or something like it very soon. We heart literati future fics. Love, Sky
| Wonderlandleighleigh chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
That's so adorable!
“Mommy cheats old ladies out of their divorce settlements.”
This was wonderful! :)
| smile1 chapter 1 . 5/5/2005
Short or not, this was very enjoyable to read and well written.
Bye, smile :-)
| kathryn chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
i love this.
please keep it going.
i love it.
| GQSecondAct chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
a little bit short, but very well written and so adorable. this was a lovely little piece, with a lot of detail and sentiment that wasn't mushy. i ADORE your jess :D
hope you write more soon. i really enjoyed your little glimpse into future-lit land.
| Encarta chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
I loved this and it hardly seemed as short as it actually was.
"kissing Jess good-bye and ignores the fact that he absent-mindedly hums Octopus’s Garden when he thinks she can’t hear…"
I loved these last lines. Hope to see it continued...
| Vinnie K chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
Aw! How sweet, love future fics esp Lit. Keep writing please, one more time...Aw!
| T chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
i really really like it...cant wait to read more, update soon :)